Man, really. Poor John. I guess it's good that she finally told him about what happened and he definitely has the right to be upset. I just hope he doesn't go and do something stupid now. I'm not sure whether Kennedy has the right to be mad with this situation. I mean, he did have a bit of a hand in doing it. I don't know, but I hope things get better soon enough. They were finally happy and John even wanted to move in with her. Of course it's once they're finally happy that the truth has to come out. Though it's better now than later I guess. I'm really interested to see where this goes.
Awwwwww. I wonder what it'd really be like living with John. XD I think I read that chapter twice over, because when i got to the bottom and you said it was a crucial chapter, i was like, "Oh, damn. I better read it again just in case I missed something." XDDD [: :D
This story, is so adorable, and on the same time keeping me on edge. It's so cute, how he wants to move in and everything, god you're an awesome writer.
OhhhhEmmmGeee. <3 I loved it! John is so serious about everything, and spending a future together. :] The whole dedication thing was amazing, but then drama! I seriously, was waiting for that to happen. Of course, John get's mad, but Grrr. I want to know what happens next. Is John going to let Ali back in his life? Or what will happen between him and Kenny. Gahhhh, I want to know! haha Keep writing hun! <3 -Anniee.
Aahhh! Dammit! I was so hoping that with John asking her to move in with him, And him saying I love you, she'd just let the past me the past. But of course not. She told him, and now they have a whole Other problem ahead of them. I think it was a little selfish, because I mean, She not only made John angry with her, but with Kennedy as well. I just hope John doesn't start acting and treating Ali the way he was In the beginning of the tour! I looooovvveeddd thee update! (:
lol Wow, she's EXACTLY like me in the morning! XD Dude, she gets like... a lot of pressure from her friends to be with John. I would've freaked out on them at some point. I mean, I know and understand that they just wanna see her happy and normal again, but I would feel like it's almost gotten to a point where it's like I'm not just deciding on something that'll affect John and myself, but also them. Like they'd take her out back and beat her. lol I don't know.
I'm excited for the drama. I'm not even sure why I'd be so excited for any type of drama, but I am. I just can't wait until she finally tells John about what had happened. All this time, I've just been waiting to see how he reacts...and I can't imagine that John is going to be a happy camper. Especially not when she tells him this now that they're on good terms. I don't know, I just think it's gonna be really interesting and I'm pretty excited for that.
Loved it hun! I can't wait until Ali tells him about Kenny, I really want to know how he is going to take it! :D Please, please update! :D Love youuu! xoxo Anniee :)
Ally and Anny are so real, they remind me of some of my best friends. Lol. They'd be pestering me, just like they were annoying Ali.
“I never thought I’d live to see the day that John would be the one to tell someone not to drink too much. Wow, the apocalypse must be coming,” Jared teased, giving us all a good laugh.
Hahaa. Go Jared! That made me laugh. Lol. I really, really, really wanted her to tell John what happened between her and Kennedy, But she chickened out. Damn her. Lol. But that only means it's coming up soon, right!? Lol. I can't wait for more! You have no idea how much I love this story! (:
lol You don't even know how much I envy you for being able to pull off writing AMAZING, long chapters close together WHILE balancing the massive amounts of school shit, plus all the extra crap life throws at you. Either I'm THAT pathetic and I suck THAT hard, or you're simply just amazing[: ...I'm hoping for the latter, but a big part of me says it's a combo of both. XD
Can I just say I 'awed' during this whole chapter? Well, the majority of it, lol. At first I was pissed off at John for going off and chatting it up with some girl, But a part of me wanted to believe that Kennedy hadn't told the whole story, Or that he didn't know exactly what was going on, and in the end, I was right! Hahaa. That Ben guy . . . he made me laugh. "Dude, there's plenty of other girls at this party, Get your own." What a douchheeee. Lol. I'm glad John stepped in and saved Ali from doing something that she would, undoubtedly, Regret the next morning! And the whole ending scene, GAH! I'm in love with them! Lol. I can't wait for more! (:
I...LOVED IT. :) haha, it's about time they kissed! It's all flowing alont so well! It's just that little voice inside Ali's head that won't leave her alone. D: haha the whole Pat situation killed me, like no lie! xD and then the comment to John, "Not like that you pig" lol gah, I just enjoyed this chapter soo much! By far my favorite.! haha, and what were Garrett and Annie chit chattering about? D: haha torture, torture, torture! xD Writee moree, I want moreee. xD hahaha Love youuu! &You're welcome :)
OMG OMG OMG OMG.
I loved this chapter, but WHY'D YOU HAVE TO RUIN IT, ALI?! NOW KENNY AND JOHN BOTH HATE YOU.
AGAIN.