Can't Stop, Won't Stop - Comments

I really love this story :].
Never read anything like it.
I enjoy reading it tho :D.
Update maybe?

i love it!!! its new and different in a good way

So, I love this story
: D

Alright, so the last couple of chapters were okay, I guess. Again, this story needs some editing and research done to it. It's a great story, don't get me wrong, but if you're going to write about a illness or a disease, or something like being blind, you're going to have to research. I'm currently writing a story about mental disorders and psychiatric hospitals, and wouldn't it suck if I hadn't researched, when I know nothing of the disorders that are going to be in the story, and posted the story based on little knowledge on disorders and psych. hospitals? I think it would. I really like this story, and again, I'm in no means bashing, but I hope you can take this into consideration. But you've got my subscription.

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I'm confused. She's supposed to be a blind person yet she's running around the room, finding stuff, and just.. doing things that a blind person would have difficulty with. I don't get the feeling that she's blind at all, and I'm on chapter 4. This story has the potential to be amazing, but I think a little more research on how being blind works, and editing the chapters would make it better. I think you should describe more on her feelings and write more on how she has to cope with being blind and such. Like, she can't really lead a normal life because she is blind, am I right? I am, in no means, flaming your story. I just hope you can take this and apply it to your story. 'Cause seriously, this story can be really good. And again, this is only for the first 4 chapters, I'm sure it gets better as I read more. But, yeah, I hope you can take this. I'm going to continue reading. :)

Weeeeeeee I really like this story.... poor Johnny blaming himself

Oh my god! I love this storyyy!!!!!!
<333

I love it,please update soon?I personally thinking you should make Sunny be able to get a surgery to get her sight back....but anyways....really good story!

Bahahahaha! She couldn't find her pants. :lmfao
Don't ask why I found that to be so funny.
I'm in a very hyper mood tonight. :shock:

I must say this is amazing!! =D
I love it!

AHHHH!
No way, this story is too amazing! =D

Update... soon? =]

Ah! I lovers it!!!!!! :D :D :D

Hollywood whore/best out on the floor/I'm sorry but the party's over
Absolutely love that song off the new album!
Anyways Mel, I loved it.
Keep up the awesomeness.

I really love it.
I do.
I can't wait to see the next chapter.

OHMIGAWD!!!!!!!!!
I LOVE THIS STORY, SIR!
Hehehehehe...

Hehehe.... I iz commenting it even though you haven't started it yet.
Yeah. Cuz I'm cool like that.
START IT!!!!!