Dismantle. Repair. - Comments

  • Narcolepsy

    Narcolepsy (100)

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    Thankyouthankyouthankyou! Your the only person on this entire website who has written a Nate Young fanfic, and your writing is amazing to top it all off!
    (:
    August 24th, 2009 at 04:19pm
  • Bridgesmademyday

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    this is a great interpretation of the song; i never thought of it like that until now.
    August 15th, 2009 at 11:52pm
  • stay awake;

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    I don't listen to Anberlin but now I think I shall look them up, thanks to you.

    This one shot was incredible, that's the best way I can explain it. :]
    How you describe things is amazing and the overall idea was amazing. Wow Katelyn.
    August 11th, 2009 at 03:55am
  • StrongerWithWords

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    Lacey never knew the feeling of love because she had built up a wall around her heart at a young age. I really like the description.

    The only thing he didn't know was that Lacey needed to be dismantled and repaired first. Love when the song gets mentioned in a songfic. Not just based on it, but parts are actually mentioned.

    "The night is young and so are we." Once again.

    "I'm the patron saint of lost causes," he replied causing Lacey to lift her head up to see the wide smile across Nathan's face. That's my favorite line of the song, I love how you wrap the storyline around that of the song.

    "I'm not afraid of dying." Lacey looked at him in the eye, "I used to be afraid of living." Love it!

    He'd dismantled her, only to let her leave him in need of repair. Best ending line I've seen in a long time.
    August 4th, 2009 at 06:01pm