Picking up the pieces with you - Comments

I promise i'll update as soon as i can. But i am going away for a week but i'll do my best to update the moment i'm home. Thank u guyz

XoX

nice!

This is really goood!!!
More soon???

Elle you are strange. Hu the hell would fantasise about amandas chocolate covered head?

Mmm Amanda's chocolate head...

hahaha all gud all gud!!

I will go read it now and comment.

and shush you about my silly lil mistakes. im tired and well tired so shhhhhhhhhhh

Hell yeah it's different!
It's... sorry this may sound harsh...
When I read it first (on refill) I thought there was too much talking, not enough of everything else...
But you've changed that and now its AWESOME!!!

LOL, have you read the updates on mine?
Giggle squeak! It's thrity three chapters old on Mibba now...

"very very dark chocolate, melt it and thenpoor it over your head"

really its different? are you sure? i mean yeah i made some minor not going to make a difference changes but thats about it. its probably because you havent read the beginning in like FOREVER!!!

Yes amanda you better post or i will hunt you down and school and steal your very very dark chocolate, melt it and then poor it over your head. haha

YAY FOR POSTING!

AnyWay, moving right along...
Lol this is totally different from whet you have written on refill.
I had to check if i was reading the right story.

XD AnyIero, I want another chapter and I might... put a chapter on mine?
Do you know I haven;t updated since the 25th of June?!
I'm a bad person!

well lets just say u did have something to do with it. You are really scary at times elly

*Gigglesnort* I like to think it was my very threatening blackmail that got you to post this :D

I love it.
Luuuuuuuuuurve it.
Bunches and bunches. xD

Awwww YAY! More soon please? ok? ok....

me likey it lol *subscribes*

This was brilliant.
I love it, and the way you write is so compelling and captivating.
I also love your usage of detail and the way you capture emotion.
Please update soon, I am going to subscribe right now.

Awsome! Update soon please?

BTW: PAGE CLAIM!