I chose this one because it didn't have any comments and I felt like it deserved some :3 I loved this, even though it was unbelievably short. You managed to convey this really strong idea that the narrator needs to stop wishing and needs to stop loving this person in such a small amount of words. I can’t keep looking in the sky, in the hope that maybe a shooting star will fly across the midnight abyss lighting up in different shades of red and yellow. was my favourite line.
I chose this one because it didn't have any comments and I felt like it deserved some :3 I loved this, even though it was unbelievably short. You managed to convey this really strong idea that the narrator needs to stop wishing and needs to stop loving this person in such a small amount of words. I can’t keep looking in the sky, in the hope that maybe a shooting star will fly across the midnight abyss lighting up in different shades of red and yellow. was my favourite line.