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  • StealingSouthDakota;

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    Wow this story is absolutely amazing.....I read all 14 chapters...and I cant wait for you to update...... Imma gonna kille me some M shadows, noooo sadly i cant do that...hes just too damn fine... *sighs*
    September 6th, 2009 at 09:53pm
  • NotJasmineTee

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    My goodness!
    That was amazing.
    And some guy should come down the stairs like "SHA BAM!" babyyy- come back to bed!
    And then Val smiles and be all like "noo, I can't marry you."
    And then Matt should be heart broken and repair things with HER.
    xD but but but, I really like what's his face! The guy with the kid. AIDEN! That's the name.
    Wow, I just sneezed all over myself. Ew.
    Anywhoo! Yeah. Idk, but whichever way this story goes... it's up to you! I just can't wait for more.
    Wow, that sneeze made me not all sickly no more. Ew.
    September 6th, 2009 at 08:51pm
  • thePHunkmaster

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    I really thought Matt was going to randomly show up at the hospital -O_O-
    Poor Evie with her dad being in the hospital.
    September 6th, 2009 at 06:32pm
  • EmilyPlague6661

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    I really like this!! (: ;]
    September 6th, 2009 at 04:01pm
  • starr8nn

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    i am, IN LOVE with this story.. i am not even kidding, i really want u to update soon ok?.. and wat did u think of blood promise, i got and read it the exact same day it came out. i lovedd it, wat was ur opinion?
    September 6th, 2009 at 07:36am
  • thePHunkmaster

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    Wow I really love your story! I hope you can update super soon! =]
    September 6th, 2009 at 06:32am
  • LivingASyn

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    Aiden seems like a real nice guy.
    I wonder who is calling her, but I think I know who it is. lol
    Great update, more soon please!
    September 6th, 2009 at 05:49am
  • Ricky Ricardo

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    And if Matthew proposes to Val, I will kill him myself. -_-
    September 6th, 2009 at 05:17am
  • Ricky Ricardo

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    Ah! I missed like three updates!! o_O
    I LOVE IT!
    And I bet my soul it's Matt.
    September 6th, 2009 at 05:17am
  • dream;lover

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    So i jus read your story and i think its greaaaat!
    I loved it! I think Aiden's a pretty good guy, and i can prolly
    guess who called her. I wonder what's gonna happen next!
    And i hope Matt wont propose to Val, not yet!
    Anyways, i loved it and can't wait for the next update! :D
    September 6th, 2009 at 05:02am
  • Marissa1117

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    Well I found out one thing.Matt is an asshole.Gosh I can't believe he told evie to get out.Great story btw.:)
    September 6th, 2009 at 03:46am
  • LivingASyn

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    This story is really good.
    I like it alot.
    I cant believe matt isnt gonna try and fix his relationship with evie. He better not propose to val cuz he'll be a real asshole if he did.
    Cant wait to read more, Update soon please
    September 6th, 2009 at 01:03am
  • VengeanceXChickX

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    HE BETTER NOT PROPOSE TO VAL!!!!
    September 6th, 2009 at 12:40am
  • VengeanceXChickX

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    Awwww I love how she's trying her best to move on. He seems like a great guy.
    September 5th, 2009 at 07:52pm
  • Megan xo

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    I like this story, alot.
    I love the last chapter, simply lovely :}
    xx
    September 5th, 2009 at 05:24pm
  • Freak Out

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    FINALLY! she did something smart!
    September 5th, 2009 at 08:04am
  • FreeMarie11

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    oh my goodness you nearly made me cry with this last chapter! i cant wait for the next chapter :]
    September 5th, 2009 at 06:08am
  • Ricky Ricardo

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    I liked it!
    I felt her pain, too.
    September 5th, 2009 at 05:31am
  • MoveYourHips

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    I actually really like the name Grace. I think its a cute name for a little girl...

    <333
    Angelina
    September 5th, 2009 at 01:42am
  • Ricky Ricardo

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    Aw! That was awesome!!!!!
    <333
    September 5th, 2009 at 01:37am