Oh my gosh!!! This was such a sweet ending!!! :D I really really loved it! They have two beautiful little girls and are a happy family now. Awesome! I wouldn't have wanted it any other way. :D I'm sad to see it go, but you did it in the best way possible. As I knew you would. ;)
Amazing last chapter!! Its gonna be hard to top this. I loved it from start to finish. I'm sure you'll find a way to do it though. You always do :D Can't wait for your next fabulous story!!
Talk about a cliffhanger! And you think I do them well? Yours are...let's just say I really really really want to you to update right now. :P
I really loved this chapter. It was a nice recap to what happened and how Kelly is coping with everthing...or not coping. Her world's been turned upside down and you portrayed that excellently. I felt so bad for her when she was like 'I have no place to go'. I choked up. Joe needs to stop doing the hero thing and just be with her. He's not helping her by walking away. Sorry, but he's not. And if he knows what's best for him he'll stop, turn around with his shocked expression, and scoop her up in his arms and lavish her with kisses. That's all there is to it. No overthinking crap. He just needs to let himself be happy for once.
You better not keep me waiting long for an update. I will be not a happy camper. I seriously want to know what's going on here. Joe HAS to like that she's pregnant. He HAS to.
Awesome chapter :D Wow, she's pregnant. It's like Chantale all over again. I hope he doesn't leave her. I'm sad that it's almost over. It was a great story! Can't wait to read more, so update soon please!
OH MY GOD. i am ADDICTED to this story. i love it SOOOOO muchhh & how Joe is in it. I just started reading this a few days ago and thought how sexy it was that Joe was a witness protection program buff dude xD PLEASEEEE add more i love this so much especially the part that he can't speak and he wrote 'i love you' on the paper & gave it to her i thought that was so cute it was my favorite part xD But yeah, PLEASE add more soon!!!
This was such a sweet chapter!!! I loved it! My heart went out to both Kelly and Joe who are so totally in love and in such pain because of two stupid guys. It sucks that it was his dad, but he doesn't appear to be the mastermind behind it all. I wonder what his motivation was then. Did Aaron or Bradley or whoever give him a lot of money? I don't know. But no money should ever come before your own children. Mr. Jonas must have been desperate. I'm sorry about her parents' death since they were just there to see them. Yes they were mean to her, but still, they shouldn't have died. Its so creepy to think that this is connected like that to Chantale's murder. I bet that doesn't make Joe feel good at all. I really hope that Kelly gets her revenge because lord knows she deserves it after all that Aaron/Bradley/bastard put her through. I wanna know why he targeted her to begin with. That's what's on my mind right now. If he had this planned out before she even witnessed the murder she did. Hmm....I guess you'll let us know in good time.
I definitely want a sequel but I've already told you that. haha! Loved the chapter! Update soon! :)
Oh my flippin gosh! Aaron -Bradley whoever the hell this guy is. He's rotten, he's rotten to the core. But thank God that Kelly's okay. I'm relieved. : ] Hopefullly Joe'll get his voice back soon, sonner than normal would be nice too. haha. Now I'm needing to see what her thoughts of revenge are, all I know is that it will be brilliant. And lastly, a sequel would be quite amazing, but if not it was an amazing story on its own! {But I would read a sequel so just keep that in mind ; ] } Great to see an update, hun.
Whoa so Bradley is actualy Arron?! What a jerk! I can't believe he killed her parents. Update soon please :) :) :) Oh and I would definitely read a sequal :D
Holy! I did not see that coming...the whole scene and all. I kinda knew the people (or squeezed it out of you :P) but the brutality of it all...that just surprised me. Aaron STABBED her?! Why the hell would he want her dead? I mean what did she ever do to him? Was he the guy in the alley killing the other girl? OMG! He was, wasn't he? Holy! This just keeps me on my toes. And I kinda feel bad for Paul cuz it seems that he was only a pawn in the whole thing who never fully understood what was gonna happen. But then again, he had a choice so yeah...that lessens the pity. It seems like he was playing her parents too but then again I really didn't like them so no love lost there. Her mom was very bitchy to her. whatever.
I can't wait to see what happens!!! Please update soon!!! :) Oh and I love the new banner :D So cute!
HOLY FREAKIN CRAP! I just about died after reading that last bit. And for some reason, I had a feeling it was Aaron. He's a butt.. and that's putting it lightly. Very lightly. And honey, no worries on the graphic-ness of it all. It wasn't as bad as you may think. I loved every minute of the suspense in this update! Gosh, now I can't wait for more! : ]
Oh my gosh...that chapter was intense! I can't believe her parents would be that cruel as to tell her to leave just becasue she came back with Joe! And PAUL! I suspected him though, Arron, not so much. What is wrong with those two! I reallly really want to know why they both want Kelly dead, so please please please please update soon :)
My mind is sort of in a blurry state right now, so my apologies from now. That chapter was definitely so intense, but so good! (I mean, the whole concept, not that Joe is all hurt and what's supposed to happen) And for whatever reason, I had his dad in mind before, so it wasn't too shocking for me. I hope that they can make it out well. Wow, this is so good!