One Chance - Comments, page 2

andloveisaword (100)

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I really like this. You're writing style is great : )
Update soon, love

August 4th, 2009 at 06:11pm

The Marty Parade (100)

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It's brilliant Roxie, I really liked it.
Though I don't get this sentence "and her bangs were always in her face, just a bit."
The last part just seems unnecessary.

I like your writing style and the fact that metaphors and endless descriptions doesn't seem to be your thing.

August 4th, 2009 at 02:22pm

lalala09 (100)

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I reaaaallly liked it!

August 4th, 2009 at 10:52am

lainey; therapy. (100)

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ROXIE I LOVE IT! :arms:
it's fantabulous.
more soon, I'm hoping?

August 4th, 2009 at 07:20am

CourtneyJay (100)

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I like it!!!!!! i like it a lot! plz continue this! its a great start! :)

August 4th, 2009 at 06:25am