Your Eyes See Right Through - Comments

You are a fantastic writer,I just don't agree with everything. Riddick would never treat Jack like that.Especially once she grew up & became Kyra,he fell for her.And he was a murderer NOT a rapist.But this is just a story and non the less it is a great story!Well written!!

Whats funny is I just watched all of those movies with Vin as Riddick.

But I like this story so far
keep up the awesome work you are
a great author!

brittanybank:

i love it!
lol,
dark and sexy in a semi twisted way,
yet still amazingly written

thanks for reading and commenting!

i love it!
lol,
dark and sexy in a semi twisted way,
yet still amazingly written

This story was very interesting
and very well written.
At first, I wasn't sure how the song was part of the story
but as I read I got it
and it was extremely well done.