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  • sullenriotxx

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    You are a fantastic writer,I just don't agree with everything. Riddick would never treat Jack like that.Especially once she grew up & became Kyra,he fell for her.And he was a murderer NOT a rapist.But this is just a story and non the less it is a great story!Well written!!
    February 2nd, 2013 at 07:55pm
  • Morgan_Dawn54

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    Whats funny is I just watched all of those movies with Vin as Riddick.

    But I like this story so far
    keep up the awesome work you are
    a great author!
    August 12th, 2009 at 10:13pm
  • bloodravyn

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    brittanybank:
    i love it!
    lol,
    dark and sexy in a semi twisted way,
    yet still amazingly written
    thanks for reading and commenting!
    August 11th, 2009 at 12:52pm
  • honeybee-red

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    i love it!
    lol,
    dark and sexy in a semi twisted way,
    yet still amazingly written
    August 11th, 2009 at 10:12am
  • Lynnie Vicious

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    This story was very interesting
    and very well written.
    At first, I wasn't sure how the song was part of the story
    but as I read I got it
    and it was extremely well done.
    August 4th, 2009 at 11:35pm
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