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  • ambeymaree

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    I lovee this story.
    Can't wait for more!!
    June 12th, 2010 at 11:42pm
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    well, I liked the chapter, even if you and your small, un-noticable writers block self didn't =)
    Urgh, VIV GET BACK WITH OLIVER
    Aiden, realise Zhora is in love with you and date her
    Alice...just continue doing whatever you do best XD
    June 12th, 2010 at 10:43pm
  • RazzleBazzle

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    Love this story so much! It's brilliant XD and I love Oliver. He rocks.Can't wait for more!
    June 12th, 2010 at 09:15pm
  • RandomnessRoxMaSox

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    Aww poor Oliver :( I really love this story, can't wait for the next chapter :)
    June 12th, 2010 at 08:39pm
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    WOOO! Loved it <3
    So much drama has been happening lately =O

    I think that Viv should forgive Oliver, he does seem sorry about it, and I think that he may actually love her

    Looking forward to what happens next =D
    June 9th, 2010 at 06:58pm
  • allzac

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    mmm i dont think i like Kevin :S wait... his name is kevin haha :)
    May 31st, 2010 at 10:27am
  • OliveRein

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    yes i agree with razzle. oliver should be in it more. this is so awsome so far :]
    May 30th, 2010 at 10:51pm
  • RazzleBazzle

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    Yay love this! Need more Oliver!! He's awesome even if he did make a bet :)
    May 30th, 2010 at 10:18pm
  • HankieHead

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    woah, this story is AWESOME!!! Please update soon cause i really wanna know what happened...a few mistakes with spelling such as rapped instead of wrapped and some places the coding is wrong so you can see what the coding is spose to be but hey, nobody's perfect right?
    May 19th, 2010 at 01:09pm
  • OliveRein

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    i think she should see her dad :]
    May 18th, 2010 at 09:56pm
  • RazzleBazzle

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    WOO! This is brilliant and I love it!! Update soon!
    May 18th, 2010 at 08:43pm
  • Beyond.Exquisite

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    *i meant Oli completly deserved to get punched*
    May 12th, 2010 at 07:38am
  • Beyond.Exquisite

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    awww.! i dnt know who to feel the most sympathy for.
    Oli, who just got dumped by the girl he loves because of some stupid bet
    Aiden, who just got rejected by the girl of his dreams & one of his best friends
    or Viv, the girl that got hurt by the only guy she's ever loved.!

    it's just to hard to pickk ONE of them to feel sorry for.!
    do idk who i liike more now. Aiden, or Oli.

    I always sorta favored Oli over Aiden...just, well..idk i just did haha.
    but i do feel bad for Aiden. he's getting his heart broken by Viv, and she's so blindly in love with Olli to even realize it. it's so heart wrenching lolz.

    oh.! btw. i LOVED the part when Oli got punched.! even though I liike Oli, that doesnt mean that I dont think that what he did was fuckked up. I actually thought he completly it. xDD

    well anyways, that was an AWESOME chapter ((as always))
    & i cant wait to read more.!

    i hope Viv let's Oli explain soon =/

    well update ASAP.! i wanna read more hahaha
    May 12th, 2010 at 07:37am
  • allzac

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    ... last line made me upset.. :(
    May 11th, 2010 at 02:06am
  • OliveRein

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    Yay you updatded! :] i love you!
    May 10th, 2010 at 11:10pm
  • RazzleBazzle

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    AWW!!! I love this!!! I hope Viv gets back with Oliver!! Update sooon!!!!
    May 10th, 2010 at 08:27pm
  • Kiss Me At Sunset

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    NEXTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT CHAPTERRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
    May 6th, 2010 at 10:42pm
  • Reckless

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    Ohh, woah. I still love Oliver ;)
    Moreee!
    May 5th, 2010 at 07:02pm
  • allzac

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    wow.. he was crying O.o lol :)
    May 5th, 2010 at 12:24pm
  • Cecila220

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    OMGEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love tht chapter sooooo much. Yu need 2 like hurry up and post Tomorrow. no joke, lol
    May 5th, 2010 at 05:08am