August 12th, 2010 at 09:43am
Petal - Comments
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I like it! Its really good, kinda scary though...O.O hahaJanuary 12th, 2008 at 07:11am
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A few tense problems, but otherwise pretty good. Be you a procrastinator? I see no updates...November 8th, 2007 at 02:43pm
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Thats really good - Now someone actually does like the story and has commented :D
Its kinda scary though...
More soon?October 23rd, 2007 at 05:09pm -
Well I'm sorry you aren't as well as astablished an author as ME!
*goes off in a huff*August 19th, 2007 at 02:33pm -
Fine! You know i actuaally thought somone liked the story and commented but nnnnnnnnnnoooooooooooooooooooooooAugust 19th, 2007 at 02:31pm
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It sounds too cliched to put "pink". And cliches are not good.August 19th, 2007 at 02:28pm
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I like it but the the dress was pink god dammitAugust 19th, 2007 at 01:51pm
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WRITE MORE GODDAMIT!
August 19th, 2007 at 01:42pm
Keep up your awesome, super-cool, very brilliant and creative writing! :)