damn you and your addictive story, now I'm going to fail my chemistry exam cos I read this instead of studying!!!!
Only bad thing is that you missed out apostophies(' cos I dont know if thats how you spell it) It just drives me insane when people miss use them or leave them out!!!!! so please fix it then it'll be perfect!
o, and there is no need to apologise, you seem to have put I'm sorry a lot, don't be!
awesome update as always... and god, what is it with you and Mark Wahlberg?!!! jeez...anyway, i know how you feel (about what you said at the end). i'm dying to write another story, but don't have the time!!!! grr!!
heeheehee
this part made me laugh