Shadows in the Night - Comments

Yay, update! :D

The way you wrote this was beautiful, by the way. Very maturely written. :)

awww poor Mikey!

Run Jason, run for the border! They can't follow you in Canada! My friend Cody will hide you!

Run Jason, run for the border! They can't follow you in Canada! My friend Cody will hide you!

Damn...what a good chapter :)

I wonder what Billie's plan is? Hmm...*taps chin*

Wonderful update. Keep it up! :D

Hi Jason! You the man!

poor mike

Ok seriously, this needs to be published. I will be the first to buy it, and I will run around my whole fucking school and force every teacher and student to buy it. XD

What a great twist in Chapter 12!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I never suspected that L'Ombre had a reason for being so cruel. The only question I have is, why would he call all the girls Gloria, and they're prostitutes? That's kinda insulting his daughter.
But seriously, I never suspected this. You're a-fucking-mazing!!! 8D
I love the how you described everything, also.

Btw, I'm serious about the publishing thing. XD

Aly, I can't say it enough, your stories never cease to amaze me.

That last chapter was so...disturbing, but put together in an amazingly coherent array of Christians and Glorias and gays and destruction. It was great! Wow. It's like Law and Order + Green Day + everything you could have a night mare about.

Loved it, as usual! =D

More soon?

GAH this story is intense!
I loved the newest chapter! :)

The Darkside.:

Whoa...major suspense dude. You got me on the edge of my fucking seat!

You MUST update asap, or it'll kill me now!

P.S. Poor Mikey... :(

I was crying on webcam reading this

Whoa...major suspense dude. You got me on the edge of my fucking seat!

You MUST update asap, or it'll kill me now!

P.S. Poor Mikey... :(

update soon! Poor Mike! I'd take the bullets before I gave up my ring! dude the L man is gay? that's cool but KEEP UR HANDS OFF STELLA!

I hate L'Ombre, that fucking cock-a-roach. (That was from Scarface.) :XD
*sighs sadly* I just know he's going to rape Billie... :(
My god, I never suspected his gayness, though. Good way of using the element of surprise. ;)

Now that I know he has a weakness, that makes me feel better, because I really thought that the cock-a-roach was invincible.

It would be cool if lapdog and his other workers found out that he was gay and beat the shit out of him. I would be laughing like this!

Update soon, lovey.

The way you had him use Stella to make him limp was brilliant, by the way. :D

Fuckin....this is....oh my God. :shock:
This is one of the best stories I've read in my life (and I've read tons of books, so that's saying something) It should have WAY more comments and readers than it does now. :grmml:

The plot is so original and well written! You and Molly are amazing. :mrgreen:
Expect to hear a comment from me from now on! I've subscribed, and I can't wait for an update.

You know, I figured...since you and Molly were reading my story, I thought I'd read yours (I already read one of hers) and I'm glad I did. :D
This story rocks my world!
Btw...that last chapter was so hot. :yah

.....wow. my virgin mind is now warped. but good still

OH MY GOD! MORE SOON!

I dig the chapter title. Poor Mike! I'll be Stella's Christina ;)

you have to continue! This is great! STEEEELLLLLLAAAAA!!!!!!

So, I basically just wanted to say that this story is pretty much amazing.
Yep, I love it. Continue?