November 1st, 2009 at 04:24am
Shadows in the Night - Comments
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awww poor Mikey!October 31st, 2009 at 02:50am
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Run Jason, run for the border! They can't follow you in Canada! My friend Cody will hide you!October 23rd, 2009 at 01:23am
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Run Jason, run for the border! They can't follow you in Canada! My friend Cody will hide you!October 23rd, 2009 at 01:23am
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Damn...what a good chapter :)
I wonder what Billie's plan is? Hmm...*taps chin*
Wonderful update. Keep it up! :DOctober 22nd, 2009 at 06:52pm -
Hi Jason! You the man!October 10th, 2009 at 06:00am
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poor mikeOctober 7th, 2009 at 12:48am
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Ok seriously, this needs to be published. I will be the first to buy it, and I will run around my whole fucking school and force every teacher and student to buy it. XD
What a great twist in Chapter 12!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I never suspected that L'Ombre had a reason for being so cruel. The only question I have is, why would he call all the girls Gloria, and they're prostitutes? That's kinda insulting his daughter.
But seriously, I never suspected this. You're a-fucking-mazing!!! 8D
I love the how you described everything, also.
Btw, I'm serious about the publishing thing. XDOctober 6th, 2009 at 06:55pm -
Aly, I can't say it enough, your stories never cease to amaze me.
That last chapter was so...disturbing, but put together in an amazingly coherent array of Christians and Glorias and gays and destruction. It was great! Wow. It's like Law and Order + Green Day + everything you could have a night mare about.
Loved it, as usual! =D
More soon?October 2nd, 2009 at 04:35pm -
GAH this story is intense!
I loved the newest chapter! :)September 20th, 2009 at 09:43pm -
I was crying on webcam reading this- The Darkside.:
- Whoa...major suspense dude. You got me on the edge of my fucking seat!
You MUST update asap, or it'll kill me now!
P.S. Poor Mikey... :(
September 20th, 2009 at 07:09am -
Whoa...major suspense dude. You got me on the edge of my fucking seat!
You MUST update asap, or it'll kill me now!
P.S. Poor Mikey... :(September 20th, 2009 at 06:49am -
update soon! Poor Mike! I'd take the bullets before I gave up my ring! dude the L man is gay? that's cool but KEEP UR HANDS OFF STELLA!September 18th, 2009 at 12:48am
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I hate L'Ombre, that fucking cock-a-roach. (That was from Scarface.) :XD
*sighs sadly* I just know he's going to rape Billie... :(
My god, I never suspected his gayness, though. Good way of using the element of surprise. ;)
Now that I know he has a weakness, that makes me feel better, because I really thought that the cock-a-roach was invincible.
It would be cool if lapdog and his other workers found out that he was gay and beat the shit out of him. I would be laughing like this!
Update soon, lovey.
The way you had him use Stella to make him limp was brilliant, by the way. :DSeptember 18th, 2009 at 12:20am -
Fuckin....this is....oh my God. :shock:
This is one of the best stories I've read in my life (and I've read tons of books, so that's saying something) It should have WAY more comments and readers than it does now. :grmml:
The plot is so original and well written! You and Molly are amazing. :mrgreen:
Expect to hear a comment from me from now on! I've subscribed, and I can't wait for an update.
You know, I figured...since you and Molly were reading my story, I thought I'd read yours (I already read one of hers) and I'm glad I did. :D
This story rocks my world!
Btw...that last chapter was so hot. :yahSeptember 12th, 2009 at 04:02am -
.....wow. my virgin mind is now warped. but good stillSeptember 11th, 2009 at 04:22am
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OH MY GOD! MORE SOON!September 5th, 2009 at 09:17pm
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I dig the chapter title. Poor Mike! I'll be Stella's Christina ;)August 29th, 2009 at 09:00am
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you have to continue! This is great! STEEEELLLLLLAAAAA!!!!!!August 29th, 2009 at 07:27am
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So, I basically just wanted to say that this story is pretty much amazing.
Yep, I love it. Continue?August 25th, 2009 at 02:38am
The way you wrote this was beautiful, by the way. Very maturely written. :)