And A Big Band Sound - Comments

I want to marry this one-shot, and then renew the wedding vows every second month. I'm not even kidding--this is perfect. And it's such a shame I did not know about this until last night when it's been out there for a good month.

About his miles of pale, freckled skin, about how when Jon takes a bath and he's thinking about death, the warm water is Brendon's voice and itcalms him down, and about how Brendon's flaws are perfect like broken chocolate chips in a bowl of mint ice cream.

^ Those lines kind of make me hate everything I write. omgno: I envy your way with words.

that was amazing! the way you wrote everything bravo! <3

I don't think any words I'd say to praise you could really match up to what I've just read, but hat was utter poetic perfection. I love how you portrayed the characters, and I'm trying to get over the fact that you can make the simple concept of Brendon showing Jon papers into such an intoxicating read.

Oh lord, first comment.
Anyway, this is amazing.
I like how it shows poetic Jon and hyper Bden.
I loveeeee iiiiittt.