The Only Happy Ending They'll Ever Need - Comments

  • Lifelines

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    Beautifully written one-shot. You had no dialogue, but you hinted to it which was exactly what I was hoping for. I like the ending because all through out the story you are wondering how, in your mind, they really are. It is hinted, but at the end, you spill out who and how they really are. I liked this a lot. The results will be posted soon, so keeping checking back. Thank you for participating.
    January 13th, 2010 at 05:20pm
  • exit_arsenic

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    This was a beautiful story. I love these characters, considering how little we know about them. But you've proven that over-characterization isn't needed. At all.
    You're a brilliant writer, Korie!
    December 23rd, 2009 at 01:30am
  • LizzyLoo

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    I really loved this... It was really beautiful!
    November 30th, 2009 at 01:00am
  • Dexter Morgan

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    Aww, I loved this. (:
    November 7th, 2009 at 02:58am
  • elsa of northuldra

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    This story is a great example of how you don't always need words to express how you feel.
    October 25th, 2009 at 10:14pm
  • TheseAreTheNights

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    Aw, I found that adorable.
    :)
    August 10th, 2009 at 02:33am
  • Matt Nicholls.

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    That was pretty good! =D
    August 7th, 2009 at 11:16pm