Beautifully written one-shot. You had no dialogue, but you hinted to it which was exactly what I was hoping for. I like the ending because all through out the story you are wondering how, in your mind, they really are. It is hinted, but at the end, you spill out who and how they really are. I liked this a lot. The results will be posted soon, so keeping checking back. Thank you for participating.
January 13th, 2010 at 05:20pm