Gun Shot Lullabies - Comments

This story is amazing.
I love the idea of how you put it.
I listen to This while reading
your story, and it goes together so well for some reason.

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I absolutely loved this story! Your character development and the way you wrote the story was amazing! I especially loved how you ended the story by letting the narrator talk about himself! Gun Shot Lullabies was an awesome story! I can't wait to read more!

i cant believe jackson dies!! darn it! cant wait for more!!!!!!!!

:D I iz back. :P
I'd be completely alarmed by Cole, not slightly affection towards him. Yes, I know. Christianna is his younger sister, but I wouldn't love him after all that. Realizing thatI was giving him blow and hand jobs. Just ew.
And with her obsession to keep her brother happy, she pisses him off by disobeying orders, then witnessing the true monster she lives with. Such a pity really. I hate to see how she is in five years. Poor girl.
I would say update, but this story is done, so, for now, Update the sequeal, and I will eventually get to it. Eventually being the key word. :] Now, to chapter five. Weeee!
Oh. And i figured why I loved this story. Even though the incest is a little ew, or gross, or whatever, and your writting is fantastic and makes it bearable to read such.... Stuff, since I can't think of a better word, is because me and my brother's relationship is like Cole's and Chrissy, minus the incest and me wanting to kidnap him and move him to a "better life."
I'm older than him by three years, and he looks up to me, even though he's 5,10, and I'm 4,9 in height. O.o He likes to keep me happy, and is also afraid of what I could do to him with my disturbed mind that you know all too well from my stories. :D

He did not just make poor little Chrissy do that.... Oh my.... He did. O.o Holy hell.
What the hell is wrong with him!?! Again! And he hurt her, and didn't care! Geeze. Talking about be a sick pervert with only their needs in mind. *cringes* I hope he gets shot by those sounds, "Made to put you to sleep". Riiiiiight. Chapter 4 here we go!

Being caught up with life, I forgot to finish reading Gun Shot Lullybies, which, I just finished chapter 2. I'll get it finished... *shifty eyes* Eventually.

Anyways, moving on to me complimenting the story. Cole... Let me just say that he is a twisted, psychopathic, incesterous basterd!! How could he take such an angel from where she lived to this... This hell hole!?! X.x She's going to end up dying! But of course, he doesn't care... And oh. my. god. He's going to rape her.......................... *speechless*
Enough said. now on to chapter 3! :D

its good but when she was six and he made her give her a blow job i wanted to punch him hecka bad i mean a little girl did not know it was bad

Team Terrence. <3

ASDKLFJ, JACKASOONNN. :C
i loved him though, especially the part where they share the kiss. i love this story though, can't wait for the sequel; you're incredible. <3

i love this story :D

<3 i can't believe it ended
i'll be waiting for the sequel dear.

Wow.. I can't believe this story is over! I can't wait for the sequel. I thought that you had stopped this story long ago because for some reason the updates were never sent to my e-mail so I read from chapter 7 to 32 tonight. I'm sad that Jackson is dead, but I guess it couldn't have been Cole. It just wouldn't work.. But one thing though...? Don't you think that Terrance and Chrissy should call the cops, reporting that she's no longer missing? I mean I know its fictional and everything but think about her poor parents haha :)

Oh my gosh!! I'm SO pumped for the sequel!!! :)

A-fucking-mazing! Definitely one of the best stories I have ever read :D
Can't wait for the sequel!

I LOVE THIS STORY.
Seriously, it's fucking amazing. And it's beautifully written.
I found this story a while ago, and read up to chapter 15 or so before I had to get off my computer, and when I tried finding it again, I had forgotten what it was called, haha. So I just came across it again, and I love how you ended it, even if Jackson was one of my favorite characters. I love Terrance and Christiana together. (:

I'm subscribing, so I can get notified when you post the sequel. I can't wait! :D

This whole hing would have been better if Cole had died, or at least the asshole Shane.
I would have stabbed them to death.
They deserve to die!!!!!!!!!!

xD WOO WOO WOO
for such a successful story ;D

I'm a little bit bummed that Jackson died but I'm excited to see what happens with the sequel!

not sure if i love Jackson or hate him...

so far i really like this story. i hope that she will be okay and be able to escape Cole forever!! i like terrance too so i hope theres more of him coming along...