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  • WhiteNoise

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    Bravo! Brava! Magnifico! Tre Magnifique!

    i absolutely adored this.
    the incest grossed me out but still!
    pleasepleaseplease comment me when the sequel is up ^_^
    June 11th, 2010 at 05:02am
  • BriasCyanide

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    ...YES!!!
    COLE LIVES!!!
    :DDD
    ...As sick as it sounds...I love Cole. :D
    ICANTWAITFORTHESEQUEL!!!
    O_O
    *Watching for it!*
    You've done an absolutely amazing job with this story. If this is ever published, I will definately buy it! <3
    ~Allykins
    June 11th, 2010 at 03:38am
  • Babe_Rawr_Funky

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    awwwe its over but it was such a fuckin great end chap!!! omfggg!!! HAHA! wow everytime i do caps hahas i always think of some crazy guy in a straight jacket... just saying.. lol. but yaa! its was beastly!!! sequelll sooon!!!!! =D
    June 11th, 2010 at 03:31am
  • ImmaEnforcer

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    What a fantastic ending. I hope Cole gives up. But he won't. Looking forward to the sequel. =]
    June 11th, 2010 at 03:29am
  • Naseen Rose

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    I love how you ended it....well not end.... A-freaking-mazing!!!!!!
    June 11th, 2010 at 02:15am
  • XlooseXyourselfX

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    ohh and i love love love love terrance <3
    June 11th, 2010 at 12:17am
  • XlooseXyourselfX

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    okay so i just read like this whole thing and i think its amazing. i cant wait to read the sequel (:
    June 11th, 2010 at 12:08am
  • for_the_love_of_me

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    ahhh. Sequel.now. This story is so awesome. I swear I checked on this story like three times a day man. I can't believe jackson is dead. That made me very sad. I kinda like cole but the whole obsession thing freaks me out. I love terrance. Who the hell would do that for a girl they just met????
    June 10th, 2010 at 07:43pm
  • Rath

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    I love love love it!
    I cant wait for the sequel.
    Jackson was annoying. So Im not sad that he's dead.
    June 10th, 2010 at 07:11pm
  • animestars

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    Why didn't they call the police?!?! ughh, well I loved that chapter even though it's coming to an end Im so happy that you're making a sequel! I can't wait to see how everything turns outt..please update again soon!!! xxx
    June 10th, 2010 at 01:12pm
  • dorian will be free.

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    My GOODNESS, you're an amazing writer! If their was a word better than Amazing, I would definately use it. I'm super excited for the sequel!
    June 10th, 2010 at 10:20am
  • xshanmarie21

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    while i'm thrilled about the sequel thats coming... terrence and christina should have called the cops. it was self defense, he wouldn't have gotten jail time for that. then shane and cole would be locked up. cole, for a long time if she told them about everything that had happened.
    that makes me mad that there weren't any cops lmao.
    sequel though, cant wait <3
    June 10th, 2010 at 06:41am
  • xxxchicaxxx

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    LMFAO!!! Gosh kimm; you crack me up xD!!!
    Is Cole really in your closet!?! I agree with you about breaking Shane's arm!!!!

    (so to the story)You are amazing! I love this story and like everyone else... I'M ESTATIC FOR THE SEQUEL!!!! :D I absolutely adored how you wrote the last chapter. It gave it that brilliant ominous feeling and foreboding chill to it!
    June 10th, 2010 at 05:42am
  • Rayn's Vengeance6661

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    OMFG!!!! :D this was freaking epic :) lolx i use capital letters to express greatness or shock lolx btw cant wait for the sequel..... n for some weird reason *please don't hate me any 1* i like cole O_O
    June 10th, 2010 at 05:18am
  • Kimm

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    D:< NEVERTHELESS! BREAK HIS ARM BREAK HIS ARM BREAK HIS ARM
    June 10th, 2010 at 05:01am
  • Kimm

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    >__> shane sorta gave off that vibe you know?
    June 10th, 2010 at 05:01am
  • Kimm

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    ~xxxchicaxxx-Haha, Shane's still alive *sad face* It's necessary for the sequel. Thanks for the comment :)
    what's this?
    muahaha! it already seems INTERESTING
    and like... you should make someone go in and break his arm.
    xD
    and I was serious when I imagine him as a fattie. Like uber fat albert.
    I also imagine him ... exactly like albert except with like.. a weird version of randy from american idol face. o___o I didn't know he was white. xD
    June 10th, 2010 at 05:00am
  • Kimm

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    xD DUDE CAN'T WAIT FOR THE SEQUEL
    I can already tell it's gonna be cool. More scheming on Cole's part and all of the intense unique plots you always seem to brilliantly come up with.
    ARE YOU SURE YOU'RE 16?
    because you write like you've been writing for a hundred years.
    and yes, that's a ;D writing... pick up line that I just made up. ahaha xD
    June 10th, 2010 at 04:44am
  • Kimm

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    I just ate, x_x so when I went through my e-mail and saw story notification
    and saw
    Hello kimm;,

    You are receiving this email because you are subscribed to "Gun Shot Lullabies" story. This story has been updated. If you wish to view the new chapters, you may use the following link:

    http://www.mibba.com/scripts/get_story_link.php?story_id=185670

    I swore I needed an oxygen mask. ;D
    June 10th, 2010 at 04:42am
  • Kimm

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    :teary:
    yeah, this story is AWESOME.
    and all of the synonyms of awesome.
    AND IF YOU DID NOT LIKE THIS
    you're the antonym of awesome and that's NOT AWESOME.
    Bella, great job on this, but it's not really a surprise. I love all the originals that you wrote by yourself. :D they are intense, all action-y, bloody, glorious and addictive.
    June 10th, 2010 at 04:40am