You, Me, and the iPhone - Comments

  • queeniecharlie

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    awh <3
    January 11th, 2010 at 03:02am
  • Macy Emalia

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    love it! its so sweet!
    December 18th, 2009 at 06:29am
  • minihaido

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    That was greattt.
    Now I see why you like writing so much too~
    Nicely done. ^-^
    August 6th, 2009 at 10:24pm
  • Toasty.

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    qasf0he9ogj;

    that was amazing.

    “Maybe it was meant for you to be a total ass to me and drop my phone in the water,” Jack insisted.

    Alex ate a spoonful of soup carefully and pursed his lips together for a second, “why do you say that?”

    “Because if you hadn’t…I wouldn’t have been able to say thank you and that I accept your apology. And I definitely, definitely, would not be able to do this,” Jack scooted closer to Alex.

    He glanced at Alex’s lips and then connected their lips softly. Alex seemed shock but when he finally had time to react the kiss was over.


    that seriously was my favorite part. it was just so cute. you're a great writer. In Love
    August 6th, 2009 at 10:14pm
  • secretvampireninja!

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    ahhh i freakn hate one shots lol
    mainly because they end up being so damn good and they dont get continued!
    August 6th, 2009 at 10:09pm