I really enjoyed this. You're a pretty terrific writer, and this was a great idea.
I love how you flash-backed to describe their relationship a little. It gave the reader more insight into what her life was like before the relationship.
All in all, it was great. Good job. : )
August 17th, 2009 at 10:10pm
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I love how you flash-backed to describe their relationship a little. It gave the reader more insight into what her life was like before the relationship.
All in all, it was great. Good job. : )