August 16th, 2009 at 11:55pm
However, i just wanted to say that adore everything about this, and it's possibly one of the best stories i've stumbled upon on here. It draws you in and eats you alive, your imagery isn't overdone but it's perfect, stunningly odd and it sends your brain off on a thousand tangents. I'm reading the rest of your work now, no question.
God i sound like such a fan girl :tehe: but i love this to pieces
once again, sorry i haven't been able to leave a proper review
From what I've read so far, it's a good and promising story, though I have to admit, some times I'm a little confused :shifty But maybe that's just part of the way this story will go, so I won't comment more on that.
I like the way you describe it, it's coloring, but still not too much, and I like that.
Maybe not the best comment you've gotten, but I felt that I needed to comment on it :shifty And I really want to read more :tehe: