Tonight We Drink To Youth - Comments

this is really really really good. I really love it. I hope you do a sequel because there's a lot of room to do so. <3

Wow this was really good, i hope you might continue this, or write a sequal *hint hint* :) it would make for a happy molly:)

i hope you haven't stopped writing.

i wish that you've gotten more comments and stuff because this is truely an amazing story.
i've never read a story plot like that and it really ties me forward when she left.
when i clicked on your name, it didn't show a page so i'm thinking you deleted so it's quite a disappointment but i loved your story.

i won't be able to keep this off my mind,
jackie.

Freakin A. This couldn't be better. Excellent writing :)

PLEASEEEEE WRITE A SEQUEL!

Please write a sequel!

I just read the whole story and ohmygod it's amazing. <333

i'm pretty much with everyone,
with how i just read the whole thing and wish i had found it sooner.

i just thought this was completely brill, i love how you portrayed every character, every situation, every chapter. i like how this was so short, only eight parts, and yet i feel like i have just read a five-hundred page book. this was that amazing.

also, exactly what master syko said, it was quite neat how this was portrayed after the band had gone to shit. and then there is the whole thing was in matty's point of view, it was refreshing and very well written.

im def all for the sequal, but i don't want to pressure you (:

I just sat down and read this all in one go. I loved it. It was so insanely adorable and when Matt was like, "Are you guys seven?" When they asked him to watch movies, that brought a huge grin to my face. Not only was it nice to see Oliver in a stable relationship for once, seeing as how all of us like to put him in horrid situations, but it was also nice to see that he was happy ;D Curtis was written so adorably in this, and I just wanted to hug him the whole time, especially when you said he yelled out bingo balls. :D Hahaha. Oh! And I thought it was quite rad how you made this after the band had lost everything, it was so strange, but good writing. :D

Um, I wish I would have seen this sooner so that I could comment on every chapter, but I didn't. So now I'm advising you to make me aware whenever you decide to start a new story, seeing as how it was unbeknown to me that you also rewrote Overpass. :D

i just spent an hour reading this story and over all, i love it! it was different from your type, boy looks at girl story. it was very cute. i love how matt like chocked when he tried to talk to her the first time, i laughed aloud and my mum was like, "whats wrong?" & now ive realized that you should carry on with the sequel, i really want to know what happens now! i mean she just left like that and porr matt. how could she leave?! he is a beast! & well, curtis is very foolish for telling clare that olivers got a girlfriend, but she is also sillying taking that information secondhand instead of from the horses mouth. im going to go read the first chapter of the sequel now! maybe this will make you wanna carry on with the sequel? i mean this was brilliant! :D totally loved it.

I really like this story, the whole thing was written very well
and the characters weren't as morose as some. You have a
unique style. :)

SHE LEFT?!
WHAT NOW?!
D:
ayy.this stpry is actually something ive never read before.
very interesting (:

are you actually planning on removing some of the stories? because I'd be rather sad if you did. Like I said before, or maybe not, your writing style is so pleasant to read, and adding up the fact that they're all about tom/oli/matt, makes them all so addictive!
I love reading them, unlike normally when I prefer to read a story that is almost done so you don't have to wait so long for every new chapter, so that is a good thing too. ;D
As I've already said, I'd prefer none of them to be removed, but rather put on hiatus. But I can understand if you don't want that, cuz then all the stories will just be haunting you and I always get the urge to complete them, but I don't know how and they just start to annoy me. :P
Reading all of your stories just make me happy, but if you remove a few of them, I will understand, eventually
<3
oh and btw, this story deserves so much more comments! as well as the others

I really like this story, it's so different from other ones out there. I know I don't comment enough (does anyone really?) but I'm going to try and get better.

I love how you bolded ripped. I mean, that's what italics and bolding and underlining is for anyway, but it's always nice to see the author use it in an effective way, instead of excessively. I know i've been one of those people at times, but like i said, it's awesome to see that you never are (:
Also, "muse" was an interesting word choice, and i definitely appreciated it.

In this chapter, you describe more deeply the state of matt and Isa's relationship, even though it sounds like he has a hard time believing that they had finally reached that level. The strategy you used in this chapter, with his POV, it is very obvious that you intened for him to sound doubtful, or simply still in awe that she's finally his friend. As though he's still unconfident in the title.
Very well done on your part.

"Even Kean didn’t speak with her as much as I was."
This one sentence is the real proof of the contrast you've shown in this chapter from the past chapters. You don't go on and on about her not really talking to kean anymore, which is good because as the reader, i feel as though it isn't necessary.
You've made good judgement, in general, over the topics you should exaggerate and the ones that only require one blunt sentence.

Then you transition over to a deeper understanding not only over Isa, but of all three sisters that we didn't know existed until now, and how you can talk about Isa's favorite color in such a way as the pleasant kind from a crayola box is just pure einstein.
GENIUS.

Her mother too, it was an interesting twist in the plot that no one even considered, and I have a feeling that it could play a bigger part later on. Also, the irony with her being insane, and yet still having the sanity to think that her daughters are "destined for greatness", i really liked that.

The way you've portrayed oli as stubborn and becoming violent when someone contradicts him is exactly how i saw him even before this chapter. This is a great sign that you can steer your readers to have judgements over a character like that. You're so awesome dude.

And oh my god, the ending.
Talk about crushing bro, i was like "oh shit curtis, why would you do such a thing?!", and oli actually liked her!! Your writing outrages me sometimes, but i fucking love it all at once. I can't wait to see what's going to happen next, and if some of my suspicions are correct in the end.

Even though, honestly, i don't really have any suspicions lol.
Great job :D

So I'm in love with you!
It would be amazing if you updated!

Okay, there's tons of stuff I could quote in this one. But I won't.

I loved this one. Like, insanely loved it for some reason. I think it was the Oliver and Curtis fight. It's something not really expected from either of them, but the way it was written out definitely made it a nice touch. I love how it's sort of both Curtis and Oliver's fault that the girls are gone, in turn making Nicholls a sad camper. I was thinking in the beginning of the chapter, "Oh, awesome! They're friends now! I can't wait to see what else happens."

But of course no story makes anything that easy. I just can't wait to see what happens next. Because I know it will be great!

Finally a good Matt Nicholls story!

Nooo!
Damn Curtis made them leave.
>:|
Not cool, dude! Not cool!

But please, do update again soon.
It'd make me mad happy, yo.

HOLY SHIT! Nobody told me about this epicness right here. :( lmao.
Do I need to break out a BMTH beat down so we can get some comments here?!
People don't know how to comment on something bloody brilliant, and it is not fair at all. You deserve it, seeing how you work so damn hard.
I love you for this story. ;)
Love you, so update. :P <3