Forbidden Infatuation - Comments

I got to say, this is one of the best Joick fanfics I have ever read. Usually most are just nothing but Joick smut and usually are one-shots.

I love how you wrote this in Joe's point of view, and it actually felt and at times sounded like it was Joe. You also did a great job of not making it sound girly, from experience I know how hard that is. I could feel his emotions, especially his whole coming out thing.

I love the build up and tone this story had, and the fact you kind of made Kevin the "bad guy". Also love how near the end Joe forgave him. I actually cried when Joe was in the hospital, from experience I know how terrible hospitals can be and when you need people to help you with everyday things.

Overall this was great, love your descriptions. Also love the sex scenes, they weren't overly graphic which I adore. Not too graphic, but not underly graphic, just right in the middle.

I adore Nick + Joes' love relationship, even in real life they both have a strong loving bond. To the point I wish they were gay and not brothers at all, so it could happen. They are so cute together.

Great job

Oh my god...I just found this. It's absolutely amazing. But you made me cry when Joe lost his vocal chords. That's not fair. Poor Joe:(

You have to make a sequel.

You have to do a sequel!! I read chapter one and then I loved it so much I read right through! Best joick I ever read!!! It's amazing (:

I started reading, and honestly didn't stop till the end!!
Such an amazing story
Its really good.
YOU HAVE TO DO A SEQUEL!!

a sequel would be awsome

I cant effing wait to see what happens.

He talked!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

dude, sequel. Yes! Please! Haha I almost cried at the end. I <3 this story! Please do a sequal!

I loooooove it.
Sequel is a MUST

oh my GOD write a sequel!!! that was AMAZING!
<3<3<#<3

amazing and SEQUAL!!! Please.

NO SEQUEL!?
THERE HAS TO BE A SEQUEL!
JOE SPOOKKKEEEEE FFS!
AH!
Uh... yeah, love it... lots... and stuff... and yeah. LOVE. I don't think there's anything I dislike about it.
Hmmmm. :)
~hespokehespokehespoke~
^_^ ^_^

Please do a sequel. You can't leave us hanging like that! SEQUELSEQUELSEQUEL

Amazing job with this story and I was happy that we could be here for your hard time.

AWWE!!! you have too do a Sequel! or just something too tell me how happy nick was. I NEED too know. lol :)

OH MY FREEKING BEJESUS YOU have TO DO A SEQUEL! joes just gotten his voice back, you can't just leave me hanging wondering what happened next!!!

SEQUEL SEQUEL!!! PLEASEEE!!!!!!

OMJ he spoke!!
i think my heart stopped when he did that <3
Sequel is a must 8)

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww:) dude that brought tears to my eyes! :) sequal soon?:)

awwww he can speak =]
PLEASEE DO A SEQUEL !