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  • kaylynnjaeannxox

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    I totally loved this! :)
    You guys should totally make a sequel. ??
    amazing. end. of. story.
    August 6th, 2010 at 05:15pm
  • Sweet.Destruction.

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    Awwwsz! Totally loved this story! I loved the ending! I knew Naomi and Halvo were going to get together! You should totally make a sequel for this! <3
    August 5th, 2010 at 04:17pm
  • pocahontas.

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    i cant wait for the next 3 updates !!
    max && zoe are totally hot together, i hope they are in the end
    May 21st, 2010 at 02:07am
  • Sammy!

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    I love Chris Drew. :D I'm so happy Nick isn't such a douche anymore. :D It's great, keep on writing. :D
    May 20th, 2010 at 09:51pm
  • AnaTheInsane

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    I've got to say, I'm impressed. Its usualy realy hard for me to realy like a story, but yours certaily got me. Keep up the awesome job. I'll be on the look for the next chapter.
    May 16th, 2010 at 02:22am
  • nicholas joseph;

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    ....TOMMEHHHHH!
    -Runs Around Screaming-
    ... xP
    Lmao.
    Anywho.
    Dun dun dunnn.
    GO.
    -Nudges-
    I think you should update :0
    May 10th, 2010 at 09:22pm
  • pocahontas.

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    this is the most prefect story ever !! haha i really love it(:
    && max
    i think there should be a little more action with maxie-pad !!

    <33 cant wait for ch21 !
    May 8th, 2010 at 06:28am
  • pocahontas.

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    on chapter 8 :D
    this is amazing !
    haha in loveee with max !!
    May 6th, 2010 at 04:25am
  • pedro.

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    Oh my God! This chapter made me laugh so much!
    Especially the end with Halvo. Lolfest ;)
    I really hope the girls don't get in too much shit for it all, though :/
    Update soon, yeah? :)
    April 16th, 2010 at 05:51am
  • pedro.

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    Hahaha! I was giggling all the way through this.
    Revenge is sahh-weet! :D
    I am so glad Nick will be getting a taste of his own medicine.
    It makes me happy. :)
    April 14th, 2010 at 01:33pm
  • pedro.

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    This deserves way more comments than it has!
    I read this in one go, and I thoroughly enjoyed it.
    Desperate for more!
    Please tell me Oli gets someone. I almost cried when Naomi said she loved him a a brother. :/
    Writeee! :)
    April 12th, 2010 at 02:41pm
  • a silent escape.

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    I love the story :) And, I came up with the exact same nickname for Max in my friend's story...

    When Craig said, "Yeah. But just remember, if he breaks your heart, we break his face," That's what we said to my best friend when she was going out...

    Anyway.... Keep writing!

    XOXO,
    Lexi
    April 11th, 2010 at 10:42pm
  • theused.

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    sooo fucking good.
    i am so addicted to it, i never want it to end.
    more!!!!! now!!!!!
    March 1st, 2010 at 04:53am
  • Sammy!

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    I like this alot! It's really good!(:
    February 26th, 2010 at 11:44pm
  • kirra826

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    This is really good! I like the story so far. =]
    January 29th, 2010 at 02:00am
  • BlissfulNightmare;

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    two: Another excellent chapter. LOVED how she met the guys and her little sister. Wondering what's going to happen next?
    January 27th, 2010 at 10:35pm
  • BlissfulNightmare;

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    That's was an excellent start to a great story. Liked the descriptions, the plot so far, and the banner. Wondering what's going to happen next?
    January 27th, 2010 at 09:05pm
  • JaffaCakes

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    Okay, so i really like your story!
    Love the plot and everything,
    but i do have to say that, me myself being british find Olivers accent annoying, but i know thats totally not your fault! Im definatley not hating, im loving, but just thought you should no that! x
    PEACE x
    January 27th, 2010 at 12:45am
  • potions and spells

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    Your story is good and funny.
    Keep writing.
    One of the best stories that i have read in a while.
    January 26th, 2010 at 09:21pm
  • fallOUT

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    Oh, shoot,
    Zo is leading on Nick,
    and Max, this could get messy,
    but I love it!

    How cute is Naomi being?
    She just sounds sweet,
    with a twinkling past.
    Things could a get a little,
    intimate, with her and a band guy, most-likely Oliver,
    just maybe?
    October 10th, 2009 at 05:44pm