I've Learned to Play on the Safe Side - Comments

Beautifully written.

awwwwwww that was sooooo sweet

YAY!!!!!!
They got together!!
That chapter was fantastic and may I say very well thought out.
more?

Fantastic updates!!!
They both still have feelings for each other so they should act on them.
He's so worried about her, I feel sorry for him =(
more soon please!!

great update

i'm not really good at cretiquing (sp?) writing skills and stuff but i envy you, your style is unique and it has more feeling than anything that i've written or read on here. keep up the good work.

i really like this story...but i feel sorry for her and Jake.
i really can't understand why she hates him.
it's not his fault.
somehow, they need to talk.
more soon please!!

Your writing is soo unique, it flows into a sentance so easily.

You have good characters, they each have there own personality. The rape scene was better than i would have expected it to be, good mentail pictures (though they were disturbing D:) but all the same you are a fabulous writer

I am surprised there is no more comments. please write more, for me at least!

Oh my god. What twats. 'Scuse my French.

Awesome writing. (:

i like it more please