Woo Joe is seriously scary in this one ... I wouldn't imagine having a boyfrind like that. Update soon :) But would you make the chapter longer 'cause I want to never stop reading it haha.
okay missy you better write more of this one I like it i like it a lot. and a nice whole dead camilla thing i found that amusing knowing you, you probably had a smile on your face when you wrote that part.
I am sorry i have been such an awful reader, i beg forgiveness :p lol anywho on to the story. so 1. loved the shocker of finding out who she was. like cause you kept it as her all the time i had no idea who it was for certain. 2. wow she killed herself & wait he said he was in love with her? how did he do a 180 & go from hurting her to realising he was in love with her? 3. do his brothers have anything to say, is something wrong with them or do they hate joe are they worried for her do they know they are uncles? 4. so it seems they are starting to get to a happy family but how can he go from a jerk to being in love with her & being such a sweet guy especially when someone killed themself because of him...is there no damage? 5.is there some alternate reason he is now back & taking care of his daughter? anything with the band or someone else? like there has to be something sketch about to go down. Oh & i loved the line in the last chapter when he was joking with her & she talks about never seeing that side of him, it really gave u some more insight on what it was like for her. But if he was such a jerk back then how did she come to fall in love with him & let him hurt her? good questions to get you typing i hope! lol Can't wait to see what else ya got!
awww she dead... i wanted her to cause more drama! but what if she's alive3 and joe lied to play with anna. ok i'm goin over board but still it could happen!
Great chap! Loved it! So im guessing he is staying around......but you have my attention, like i dont know whats going to happen next. craziness! hmmm ideas,ideas.... someone above me said something about &her& & joe. i was wondering would there be any way we could maybe have some flashbacks or something. Like maybe details on how joe & anna got together. the deal with joe & &her&, idk. Like why is Joe back now? how did he find her? whats happening in his life now? did nick/kevin know about joes abusive ways? how did he get to be like that? Sorry i dont really have any ideas just questions to getcha thinking! more soon, i loved it!