Drink Up, Baby Down - Comments

So, just like i said before the story went very well with the picture. So many emotions intertwined, so confusing, yet, so clear at the other hand. :o

Now to the actual story:
I curled up on the old bed. It smelt like old cigars and sex. The smell was poignant.
For some reason this is my favorite line in the story. Yeah, my addictions kicks in.

I really like it, and the way you wrote it, and the way you portrayed the girl. :P

And of course the ending is great. Love happy endings.

Beautiful
Just like a poem.
Amazingly great written and went really well with the picture