Sick Little Games - Comments

I forgot to add:

Holy balls! It was Leah!?

Cute/kind of of happy ending.

That put a smile on my face.

Kind, heartfelt letters.

Alex and Leah <3

The emotions in the last couple updates were real to me. It was very well written.

Alex should use some ninja moves to fight them off so he won't have to go to school. That's what I'd do. Hahaha

This is my face now:
=O
You know, only not sideways.

you.killed.jack.

My gosh lol

What. The. Hell!
Oh my dude!
Wow!
I was not expecting Jack to die. That bastard better go to jail! Errr!

That's upsetting.

Honestly, I didn't think I'd like this when I started reading it. You've immensly proved me wrong. This is fabulous. One new subscriber :) Update soon, I'll be watching.

I love how you brought Fiona back into the story. Crazy moms buying presents... Hehehe.

And, oh my Jack! I feel bad for Alex. He's probably touching her thinking 'this is not what my Jack feels like'. Then, again, he did agree to it. Here lies the question: Will his actions cause a backfire?

I think yes, personally. I'm curious to see what you do with this interesting turn of events.

ohemmgee:OOO

a little short but no matter,
they were both still really good[[:

I didn't realize you updated again until after I just commented your profile then checked my e-mail.
I do like chapter 33. It was a little short and could have been in 32, but I liked that they're now boyfriends!

Haha. I'm kind of a spazz..

'pulled me closer to his body by my pants' loop holes'.
I'm glad you added that. It's my favorite move for anyone to make.

The ending sentence is great. I don't feel that it is a cliffhanger. It could be, which is cool. You could go either way, and that intices me. I have a need to read more to see where it goes.

i like it hahaxDD
its good hopefully there will be more soon[[[:

I had forgotten about Sick Little Games. An update is a nice reminder.

I think you captured Jack perfectly. He seems like he would be quite a tease.
I also enjoyed the Cribs refrences.
Both I think spiced up the chapter, in my opinion. Besides the handsy stuff. Hehehe.

Sorry about your internet loss. I know that song and dance.

I would hate to be in Alex's shoes. I don't think I could handle a homophobic best friend. It'll be interesting to see they friendship grow or completely demolish.