Oh please oh please oh please! Write a sequal! This story is amazing! I love it! So suspencful! (((:
P.s. - PLEASE don't kill off Alex! Or anyone else! Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease! (I'll love you forever???) Or I could just repeat Alex and say 'I fucking love you.'
i love how the whole group is injured yet when the next chapter comes around all of the bullet holes and stab wounds are forgotten and the girls can fight just fine... gotta love those plot holes.
I do like this story. There are just some parts that need to be fixed. It's hard to tell who's pov some chapters are in, and there are some minor spelling mistakes.
I'm not trying to be mean or anything. I just thought that you would like to know.
It was good. Brian showed his more sensitive side to his father, even though he's in a coma. XD I found the author's note hilarious. Best. Conversation. Ever.
She needs to live. And hun, you'll have to get used to it. One of my stories I have 88 subscribers and only a handful of those people comment. Some people are just silent readers. You can't change that. Please update soon.
I hope it's her mom, but I assume that it could go either way since you like to be cruel. Sooo I hope its the mom/gf person. Buuuuut who knows. Awesome chapter and please update soon!