But When Your Mummy Dies, She Will Not Return - Comments

  • nyeh

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    I like how you ended it but sometimes the flashbacks (my opinion) are too annoying :/ but describes what kind of life Tom and Harley shared before the story :)
    October 28th, 2010 at 04:32am
  • Call.Me.Rawr

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    Coooomment (:
    i'm seriously loving this lol
    the lamp breaking mad me laugh...who thought someone so young could break a lamp...but hey anything is possible XD
    hope you can update soon :D
    xxx
    August 27th, 2009 at 02:18pm
  • Call.Me.Rawr

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    :D this is an awesome story :D
    i'm loving it so far :)
    hope you can update soon!!! (:
    xxx
    August 26th, 2009 at 06:11pm
  • Cocosu

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    wow 3 updates!
    you just made my day (:
    when i read the update, your day was just beginning. my day, on the other side of the world, is about to end in an hour and a half.. isn't that just weird? lol
    so i got to read another one of your lovely chapters before i'm going to sleep.. yay (:

    how is she going to react =o
    i hope that secretly she wants to hold tom so badly!
    August 12th, 2009 at 10:34pm
  • Chelsea's Dead Smile

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    KAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    I'm just as excited as Andy is!
    August 12th, 2009 at 12:12am
  • sary_sea

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    aw i want to know what happens when tom meets andy....
    good update.
    August 12th, 2009 at 12:07am
  • Chelsea's Dead Smile

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    Awww!
    Come on Oli!
    Be fair to your brother!
    He's a dad for christ sakes!
    August 11th, 2009 at 10:26pm
  • Cocosu

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    wow i'm really liking this!
    haha you're right, tom's such a cute guy! and his eyes .. ;3
    oh btw, i've just watched this movie, incendiary, and i'd like to think that ander looks like the little boy in that movie.. (link: http://www.imdb.com/name/nm2633547/ )
    such a cute little boy! you don't see it in these pictures, but he's got sky-blue eyes.. adorable!
    please keep up the writing (: both the flashbacks and present time are lovely to read!
    can't wait to read if they're gonna meet up sometime (:
    August 10th, 2009 at 10:44pm
  • Chelsea's Dead Smile

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    I really like it ^_^
    I love Tommy Sykes stories ^_^
    August 10th, 2009 at 08:03pm