I like how you ended it but sometimes the flashbacks (my opinion) are too annoying :/ but describes what kind of life Tom and Harley shared before the story :)
Coooomment (: i'm seriously loving this lol the lamp breaking mad me laugh...who thought someone so young could break a lamp...but hey anything is possible XD hope you can update soon :D xxx
wow 3 updates! you just made my day (: when i read the update, your day was just beginning. my day, on the other side of the world, is about to end in an hour and a half.. isn't that just weird? lol so i got to read another one of your lovely chapters before i'm going to sleep.. yay (:
how is she going to react =o i hope that secretly she wants to hold tom so badly!
wow i'm really liking this! haha you're right, tom's such a cute guy! and his eyes .. ;3 oh btw, i've just watched this movie, incendiary, and i'd like to think that ander looks like the little boy in that movie.. (link: http://www.imdb.com/name/nm2633547/ ) such a cute little boy! you don't see it in these pictures, but he's got sky-blue eyes.. adorable! please keep up the writing (: both the flashbacks and present time are lovely to read! can't wait to read if they're gonna meet up sometime (: