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screamingxdreams (100)

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Oh my heart strings.
This was beyond fabulous.
I'm totally glad I found this by accident.
<3

March 12th, 2010 at 12:47am

jesus christ. (105)

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This was great. (: Your details and that little insane asylum twist at the end were incredible. Love love love. (:

September 16th, 2009 at 05:52am

Syn_Sex (100)

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wheeey, that was so cool!
especially the end when she was really insane...haha :D
great story!

August 30th, 2009 at 10:23am

mr. owl (100)

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Wow. Those were amazing descriptions. Absolutlely incredible. I'm so glad that someone dropped out and you entered my contest.
This was amazing.

If I was going to be with Oliver, I was going to be with every last bit of him.

I really really liked that line.
This was 100% amazing.

August 13th, 2009 at 05:41am

absolution (100)

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i agree, descriptions were written so well that i could perfectly picture them happening. :)
ohh oli, whatta guy.

August 12th, 2009 at 02:58am

mackenzie. (100)

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You know what I love about this. :)

Oliver and crazy girl's relationship, when theyre waking up in the morning...
Its fresh and different and I can imagine it on any other day, it being really wonderful and loving and cute. The way you wrote it this time was so hollow though, and its like even before you realize Oliver was going to leave, you could sense it in his body language and in what he said. I love it

Gooood competition, mon amie :)

August 11th, 2009 at 03:49am