Hope Starts Broken Hearts - Comments

I hope you update soon :3

I love it! Can't wait for more! :)

I'm noticing little differences here and there I'm liking the small changes excited to see what's going to happen or change next haha is be delighted to read the chapter you didn't post last time :)

Yay! You post a new chapter, I am so beyond happy right now. And I loved this chapter (like all of them, really).

I swear I love Maggie and Aspen so much. They're adorable and funny and just hilarious together. I honestly love all three of their friendships.

"Because Heidi’s a chance taker, Clyde is a home wrecker, and Draco’s a heart breaker." <--- love this line.

And this one:

"...Malfoy’s still a jerk, Maggie’s still a moron, and Belle is still single."

Actually, I loved a lot of lines in this chapter.

I think what I like most about Mira is that she stands up to Malfoy. Like, she can be afraid of him like everyone else. Yet she has a temper and can stand up to when she needs to. Any fear she may have just goes away.

She's a strong character, yet caring, sweet, loyal, a bit of an airhead, and of course a bit hardheaded lol. But that's what makes her great. She has her strengths and weaknesses and I think that makes her more real.

And how she kept from kissing him, I do not know. Crazy girl.

Anyways, wonderful chapter, I loved it! I am looking for some good HP stories as well, so if I find any, I'll you know!

Yay great chapter :) Loved the last scene especially hehe.

Belle and Draco are made for each other. You can tell Draco likes her, and I think it kind of scares him. Which is also why I think he kind of pushes her away and says rude things sometimes.

Sadly he's doing a good job of not only pulling her into his charm, but also pushing her away. Oh Malfoy, when will you ever learn?

Poor Heidi. I know I didn't like her the first time you wrote this story, and I still get angry with her. But I think you've added a little bit more to her this time around. I feel bad that she hurt herself and I feel bad that she's still hung up on Draco. It's not easy loving someone and seeing that person love someone else - especially a friend. But she also needs to not take it out on Belle (or should i call her Mira? I'm used to calling her Belle lol But I really like the name Mira. I'm so undecided lol).

I feel really bad for Belle/Mira though. It's not easy seeing your friend physically and emotionally hurt. Plus having said friend angry at you.

Great chapter, I love it. I just had my wisdom teeth removed yesterday, so it's nice to have something great to read that takes my mind off the pain.

P.S.
I do find myself reading HP with a British accent at times. Especially when the characters are talking. It's hard not to lol.

Ahh I am loving this! Keep it up!!

I love the direction the story is going. I read it before you restarted it and can't remember what all happened but I do remember that I loved it! I do a little happy dance (in my head) every time I see that this has been updated...
and yes sometimes I do read these stories in a British accent, especially in the voices of the actors who play the actual characters from the books... can't wait for the next update!

Another wonderful chapter. I love how easily Belle and Draco can talk to one another and their jabs at one another always crack me up.

I'm looking forward to the next chapter. :)

Don't be discouraged! :) Once this story gets further developed, it will gather the Potterheads and trust me - the readers will rise :) Thanks for updating - great chapter.

Ohhh you've updated! I'm so excited! Hopefully the potterheads on this site flare up again when production starts for fantastic beasts cause that much of a decline in readers is quite scary. We'll see! Whisper a quick 'reneverate' and you should be good. Keep updating! We'll be waiting!

Don't be discouraged!! I really want to know what happen keep writing!
Write it and they will come!!!

Loving the new version of this story. A lot has changed, and yet a lot hasn't. I still love Belle's humor and I still adore Aspen and Maggie. You create such a amazing characters and they just come to life.

Not only that, but you never fail to make me laugh with the witty dialogue. Maggie is hilarious as ever, along with Belle.

I can't wait for the next chapter. :)

You have inspired me to want to start writing again. I've missed it. Plus I'm like super excited that you're back and I can't wait to reread your stories.

Plus, I have really missed HP.

You have just made my day! Seeing you start to rewrite this story makes me want to write again! I look forward to it! I see you've changed a few names ;) Can't wait to see what you've got in store this time around :)

Ooo you're rewriting this story? Yay - I can't wait to see more of this:) I just love Malfoy/OC stories heheh

thumbs up :)

So I'm a new reader to this, brilliant. You write so bloody well, I'm so looking forward to the next chapters. Must resist reading the older comments though :p

Yaaaay!! I've been dying for a potter story to read! Can't wait for you to keep going with hope starts broken hearts! :)

Omfg you're working on this again. Please update everything and finish it. I'm so happy hahahaha