Mmm, I loved it even though I really don't like Lily/James. You wrote really well and brought out a side of Potter than I never saw before, haha. x] Just one more thing, though, is that I never ever ever imagined Lily or her home life to be like that. It's sorta shocking. O.o
This was amazing! It was nice seeing her gradually like him instead of jump right into it. A refreshing change. My favorite is when James got sunburnt. :) Very cute. I'll let you know if you win!!!
OMFG I absolutely love this one, too. It's great. And I and a friend have been like Lily before, I'm out of it moreso than my friend, and sometimes she still has moments that scare me, but i think she's getting better
BUT THIS IS great! I love it, and I love how you evolved their characters in this one. They're awesome.
Just one more thing, though, is that I never ever ever imagined Lily or her home life to be like that. It's sorta shocking. O.o