I really liked that story. I enjoyed how you used anorexia on a male instead of a female. It is widely thought that this disease only effectes woman, but almost 40% are effected are actually men. I could tell that you did your research on this story and the descriptions were fantastic. Congratulations and great job XD
Very, very pretty background! Even though that's not exactly what I'm supposed to be grading on but it is very pretty. I like the fact you let Ryan recover because if he died I probably would have cried. If you continued it there would be great potential for a full story...just saying....Anyways, It was a great entry, so Good Luck!
You are a fantastic writer :D