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  • Holly Ellen.

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    Rachel,
    This story is just simply amazing. You're a radical writer. More people need to read your stories and stuff. I cried on the last chapter, but that's okay because it was really amazing. I felt like I was in the whole inter story. Keep it up my dear.
    Love,
    HollyHomicide
    January 2nd, 2008 at 03:32am
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    it was amazing btw~!
    January 2nd, 2008 at 03:10am
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    RACHEL!
    i freakin love you!!!

    DONT EVER DIE!
    NEVER!
    cause this story mademe cry harder then any other story ever!

    mmmmmmmmmmmmm

    i love yoU!!!!!!
    January 2nd, 2008 at 03:10am
  • IdiotDorkGeek

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    i cant believe you killed her! really didnt see it coming!

    very good writing very realistic

    still wish it was all a weird dream Rachel was having in a coma but sadley its not :(

    more soon?

    *subscribes*
    December 29th, 2007 at 04:47am
  • xxamanda_bbyxx

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    i effing cried again??

    i'm surprised im not punching walls now.

    arrrg.
    your so good at this whole depressing writing thing. lol.

    i loveed it though

    more?

    will gee say stufff??
    December 9th, 2007 at 10:19pm
  • Bungalow

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    I still can't believe you killed her, I'm so sad.
    I need more !
    December 8th, 2007 at 03:10am
  • Holly Ellen.

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    OMG!!
    i am like on the verge of tears.
    you did so effin good.
    i love you.
    December 7th, 2007 at 06:30am
  • Bungalow

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    UH. WTF IS THAT !? YOU KILLED HER !?
    Oh god, did not see that fucking coming. Wow, okay.
    Uhm, poor everyone :[ This is so depressing D: !
    December 2nd, 2007 at 12:41pm
  • Bungalow

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    O.O Oh jeebus. What the hell ?!
    You need to frigan update like right now !
    December 1st, 2007 at 11:08am
  • xxamanda_bbyxx

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    AHHHHH MORE NOW!
    November 22nd, 2007 at 06:08am
  • Bungalow

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    O.O That's all I can manage to say.
    Amazing. Yeah, pretty much.
    November 21st, 2007 at 10:06am
  • Holly Ellen.

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    ooooooo.
    gerard is so going down.
    i liked it.
    typical you ending it at a cliff hanger.
    update soon.
    <3
    November 16th, 2007 at 08:45am
  • Bungalow

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    -new reader-

    Holy shit, why would you EVER stop that chapter there ?!
    That was not nice ! Gr, Gerard...
    Update soon please :] !
    November 16th, 2007 at 08:34am
  • xxamanda_bbyxx

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    that was soooo sweet
    October 30th, 2007 at 06:29am
  • xxamanda_bbyxx

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    whoa MORE NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    please : )
    ily.

    i was over eating popcorn like i was at a movioe theather lol
    October 19th, 2007 at 07:50am
  • Holly Ellen.

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    this chapter is really good.
    ooo you and brett had a fight... oooo
    hehehehe
    <3
    October 9th, 2007 at 07:43am
  • xxamanda_bbyxx

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    snuggles bby.
    that chapter was good as hizzeck.
    :D

    gimme a quarter of your talent, and maybe my writting will be worth something.
    i love you.

    :D
    vbruebutr so much talent you have!
    October 8th, 2007 at 01:28am
  • Holly Ellen.

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    Rachel,
    you rock my sox like an xbox
    you are the mutha effin princess.

    <3
    Rachel
    October 7th, 2007 at 08:07am
  • xxamanda_bbyxx

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    dannnnnnnng

    its toooo obvious

    imma beat somt butttt!
    October 5th, 2007 at 07:29am
  • xxamanda_bbyxx

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    my bby has talent. i love you so effing much. yay!
    September 30th, 2007 at 09:53am
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