My Smile's An Open Wound Without You - Comments

elegant crimes. (150)

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:D!

September 14th, 2009 at 05:48pm

Big.Hype (100)

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I loved it, it was pure amazing-ness.
It felt like i was peeking into pete's mind, actually watching his thoughts, understanding how his mind works.
and I love when his thoughts tell him he is broken,
it just seems like him.
pure awesomeness
<3

September 11th, 2009 at 01:36am

JonWalker (100)

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This was amazing, m'dear. You managed to capture a stunning amount of emotion in a shorter piece, and I enjoyed every second of reading this.

August 18th, 2009 at 08:38am

MirandaJune (100)

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FUCKING. LOVE. THIS. OMGGG.
I'VE NEVER READ ANYTHING LIKE THIS, IT'S WONDERFUL.

August 15th, 2009 at 06:54am

elegant crimes. (150)

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thanks guys. these meant a lot to me.(:

August 13th, 2009 at 07:49am

courier six (100)

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That is soo cute!!!
great job. loved it :)

August 13th, 2009 at 04:23am

PAINTEDxINxPASTELS (100)

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OMG.
THIS WAS.
PURE WIN.

you. nailed pete perfectly. just, wow.
"And right now would be one of those times, because lately he’d been neglecting to count his pills, and he had run out. nomorenomorenomore is the only train of thought running through his ragged mind."

that one line really struck me. it is so wentz.
anyway, i loved this. <3
theyareperfectforeachother

August 12th, 2009 at 05:43am