A Struggle for Existence - Comments

  • Ryro.

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    Aww, baby Bden gets all scared ath the beginning!

    :lmfao "Auntie Bden".
    It's not hard to imagine Pete saying that.

    It was nice to a see a fic about Ryan's dad from the view of someone who isn't Ryan.

    And it was very interesting to see a fic about Bden and his religion. I rarely ever see that unless it's in the oh mai gawd, i have to make sure my parents d0nt find out i love ryro, or they'd s3nd me to hellz fo sho sense that a moron is writing. :XD

    This was a really good one shot.
    I believe the term 'short but sweet' fits in here.

    The balance between serious and funny was excellently done.
    And it was concluded very shortly but that was good because it was like you weren't just trying to stretch it out.
    I like it.

    The ending was very sweet. It made me smile. :cute:
    August 11th, 2009 at 08:49pm
  • voldemort!

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    Ooo, I popped your comment bubble. :tehe:
    This was great. I liked it a lot.
    And Brendon and Ryan get a baby? :brightside:
    How wonderful.
    August 11th, 2009 at 06:38pm