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Author [SlytherinJadey]
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The Infamous Pixie
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i lik this story.
May 12th, 2010 at 08:31am
hello love.
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Hi, you put a lot of punctuation where it isn't needed, and names need a capital letter! Pansy, for example.
You change point of view a lot, too.
But other than that it's a good storyline :)
March 2nd, 2010 at 06:15pm
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