If I Told You I Was Dying, Would You Still Love Me? - Comments

IM SMART...WOOO! she made me sound smart...ummm..i'll be going now..

Geez, Ofelia. I almost laughed when she knocked over her pizza, what an overreaction. But I guess kids are prone to that, huh?

Poor Tamsin/you, I dunno what one to use...but she's already pregnant. So do you think that Ofelia knows she's pregnant?

I love this so much, your writing has improved too. I like how original your kids names are. I wouldn't want a name that everyone has unless I really liked the name.

You got two comments, now update damnit. XD

I love it...every word flows...its amazing..<33

Why thank you :]

I think you should finish this,and get it turned into a book because its amazing,and I would totally buy this! I feel like amazing isn't good enough,because its more then amazing