The Jordisons - Comments

DAMN. I miss this story. :(
PLEASE UPDATE. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE.
I'll do anything!!!
It's amazing. :(

Woo, new chapter. :D
I think Joey should play it a little cooler. He seems like a puppy, who's adorable and all, but is jumping all over Chaz. He doesn't wanna jump on her and get her clothes dirty just yet. :O

Lmao at my analogy.. it's a weird one, but it works. :P
Annyways, I think it's Corey, or Chaz's brother.
Dun dun duun.

Update soooon.
xo

I loved it. (:

I think the same as Kay.
Luke or the Dad abusing her. And she didn't tell him cause then he might do something to them and she'll get hurt more?

And I think he should choose the living room, but have like, a bucket or something to be sick into. That way Chaz can sit with him and they can talk.

More soon.
xo

Fabtastic chapter again. [: I aim to answer both questions without forgetting.

Maybe, Chaz gets abused by one of the members of the family, except Elsie and Terry, ofcourse. Maybe Luke or the mum & dad. And if she tells Joey, she wouldn't know what to expect etc.

And Joey should choose the living room, cause Chaz is more likely to keep on checking on him and that & Joey will feel looooved. :P

xo.

This was an amazing chapter, like always.
I reckon Joey does fancy Chaz, he just hasn't realised it yet haha.

I'm also devastated, mostly cause I know that Chaz is really down over it, it's worrying even though I don't know her as much like you do. I hope, just for Chaz's sake, Joey gets better soon. I hate knowing that Chaz is like this.
xo.

Chaz asks him to kiss her pet turtle better? jokes
Chaz asks....oh idk. asks for a kissy-wissy? LOL. yeah that'll do.
WRITE MORE

I loooved this chapterr. :D
Joey's gotz the butterflieees!
Aww.

And I think Chaz will ask him for his hand in marriage.
Is that how to spell marriage? I dunno.
Psh.

Maybe Chaz won't get a chance to ask him cause he might accidentally walk into her boobs. Then run away. D;

More soon. (:
xo

OH AND FOR THE QUESTION I FORGOT TO ANSWER (thanks for reminding me): I reckon Joey is in luuuuv with Chaz but he doesn't know it so his stomachs full of butterflys trying to tell him that he has feelings for her. ;D

Weeeeeee! Another update. :T
Amazing chapter. Every chapter is amazing, you're an amazing writer, and you & Chaz are...amazing! (I have to stop saying amazing...)

Annnnyways, i love how this chapter was written, very descriptive hehe. And it's funny cause I know exactly where they are and all that good stuff...:)

I think Chaz is gonna ask for his number, coz she luvz him. ;D And Joey luvz her back. :D

Update soon pleaseums. ;DD.
xo.

I looved this.
Even though it was rushed, it's still freaken awesome. :D
I think it might be Sid. Even though Chaz has a phobia of him. xD
Update soon!
xo

Oh, and update!
xo.

Amazing chapter, even if it was rushed. :)
And yes, Corey should carry on, and I think Chaz might be good friends with James really, he seems...nice? If not Corey or Sid cause they're crazy...
Lmao.

Corey made me laugh in this btw..I love Corey. :D

Warren sounds iite i guess.
and PUPPY! THE GIFT IS A PUPPY. a little fluffball.
WRITE MORE

I'm thinking, any of the workers would be awesome, since they all sound pretty interesting. :P
And I think the gift is.. A teddy. :F

More soon.
xo

Oh and the gift thing: maybe its tickets to a Slipknot show? :O :P

Amazing chapter. I lovelovelove it. :D
I need more of this story, moooooore!
And hm...Warren. Seems interesting lol. xD
& I wonder if Corey is starting a riot...
xo.

Wait for her! And thats that, nough said :L he HAS to wait for her :)

keep writing Br!an :)

xx

Wooo, this is awesome.
I think he should casually take a look around, so he's not listening in on her conversation, but he's still there after she's finished, so he can invite her to Pizza Express.

Do it. ;D

More sooon.
xo

He should wait for her to get off the phone.

Finally, it let me comment. :)
Anyways, I love this chapter!! Written amazingly. ;DDD!
Oh and I think Joey should stay behind, get to know Chaz and take her to Pizza Express. :D
Update!!

Oh, and it looks asif you remembered Pizza Express. ;) *removes thing from MSN personal message*