Underwater - Comments

Yeah. She was talking to a "voice"..if you may. I think it makes more sense with italics..as then it's more understandable that it's her thoughts or in her head. The main girl was Nicole. I wrote it a while ago in one sitting at random. I didn't really think through where she was...but I assumed she was in her house and had almost snapped. She may have had some mental illness that she hadn't been taking medicine or working on treating for a while...But I think what I had come up with was that it had been a mental "snap", if you will, from an emotional state that had been developing and her family had been too clueless to notice it.

I really liked it, but I was confused a little bit; was the girl who didn't know her age Nicole? And was she in an asylum or some sort of mental hospital? And who was the person that she was talking to? That's the only confusing parts to me, really.