The Finest Thing - Comments

One Shot For One Shot.

This was really, really good.

The ending made me cry a little bit. It was sad, yet I got a little bit happy at the end, thinking that Brendon would actually come back.

The only little piece of criticism I have is that I didn't get a good sense of what Chris or Ash looked like. I loved it, but I would've loved it a bit more if the characters were described a bit. The middle part with the dream seemed a bit rushed but it was very sweet.

Great job.

HOW ARE YOU SO GOOD AT WRITING??
It's not fair on the rest of us.
I loved this. When I got to the end, I wanted it to be longer. xD

It had a consistent tone and a good plot line, and it got all the emotions right. It felt a bit rushed, but overall, I liked it.