A First - Comments

Jareth.:

It was short and simple, and I loved it to death.

I loved how you described his feelings, and how, even though they broke up, he was proud of it. It's so true that people are proud of things that they shouldn't really be proud of, like failing. Honestly, I kind of brag when I get an F, and I have no idea why. : )

I liked the idea behind the first time that you used. In fact, you covered three first times in one short story: first girlfriend, first kiss, first break-up. It was wonderful.

Anyways, thanks for joining the contest. You did an amazing job. : )

Thanks! It was sort of semi-autobiographical (apart from the thing of the main character being a boy XD) so I was a bit worried it would make the same amount of sense as my thoughts, ie. not much sense at all, so I'm glad you liked it. :)

It was short and simple, and I loved it to death.

I loved how you described his feelings, and how, even though they broke up, he was proud of it. It's so true that people are proud of things that they shouldn't really be proud of, like failing. Honestly, I kind of brag when I get an F, and I have no idea why. : )

I liked the idea behind the first time that you used. In fact, you covered three first times in one short story: first girlfriend, first kiss, first break-up. It was wonderful.

Anyways, thanks for joining the contest. You did an amazing job. : )