I just wanted to let you know that your story is amazing. You are a wonderful writer! Please update soon!
May 11th, 2011 at 09:09pm
:tehe: I love how you wrote Yu! So intense and delicious!
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- I always ended up getting my face slapped or my nose flicked.
Adorable.
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- After looking at his beauty, the rest of the world appeared dull.
I liked this line. ^.^ But I think you meant every one, not every.
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- Every leaves one. Yes, even the pretty, rich people.
Harsh! lol.
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- I’m going to treat you like a dog if you keep acting like one.
<333 Loved that line!
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- that smile of his was going to get me killed some time soon, I knew it.
Aren't we all? lol.
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- Neither am I. Just a little fun.
I like this. It felt very immediate; simply described, but accurately.
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- I sat in a corner of my room, knees to my chest and my arms hugging my legs to my body. Before my nurse had left, she had handed me a worn wooden rosary, which I clutched to my heart now.
What a nice image!
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- In one fluid motion, Kiro shoved me from the window sill...
Beautiful. <3
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- Port Royal was like a charred graveyard, leaving nothing but burned angels in its wake.