Torn in Two - Comments

so i just read this. and I loved it. But I don't see a sequel and now with you doing your last hoorah, i'm really sad.

Omg, i just finished reading this, this is complitely amazing, you made me cry so much in loads of parts :( my mom even got worried! Haha i love this story, seriously, im so sad it ended that way, i love Zacky. please make a sequel very soon ! <3

SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL!!! Ahhhhhh!!! I fucking loved it. I could hit you for all that drama but I loved it. :)

I just reread this because I decided to actually act like a mushy female for a day. I cried at the end this time. You have made me a very sad little girl and I anxiously await your sequel. This was my favourite story and I really miss it. :(

I must say that I have no intention to follow your advice and not hate you for how you ended the story. SHE LEFT?!?!? I DO NOT APPROVE IN ANY WAY, SHAPE, OR FORM!!! I love Adam, and am quite pleased that she finally slept with him, and I'm happy that she doesn't end up with Zacky... I guess I approve in a couple of ways...

I hope that your planned sequel sets my mind at ease. I'm not quite sure how this ending rests with me.

When I went to the summary page and saw "The End" written under the chapter, my stomach fell into my pink toe, and I almost didnt read it because I didn't want this story to end. BUT I'm glad I did ead it because this chapter was awesome as usual, AND there is going to be a sequel - THANK HEAVENS!!! I Don't know if I could have survived without this story in my life lol, it is that good! Okay well have an awesome day or something like that, I have to go finish packing now since I'm moving to college tomorrow woot woot!! Wish me luck!

Oh my god! I can't believe this ended, sweets! I cried, as usual, but it was so good! I seriously can't wait for a sequel to this because I can definitely tell there is still much more to this story. Please let me know when you have new stories up! :)

I HAD TEARS IN MY EYES!!! SARAH!!!!!!! =(
I must have seen it coming, I mean it had to happen but oh wow i dont like her leaving.
I dont like the idea of Zacky crying, I dont like her leaving the yummy man that is Adam, and I dont like that Jimmy is upset she has left. I feel Ojama is the one seeing sense in this story he didnt want to leave!!!!!!
I cant not believe its over :( and yet it was the best and most fitting ending for this story. Perfect.
This story is my favourite ever story, I adore it.
I can not wait for the sequel.
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AHHH NOOO ITS OVER!!! I'm slightly sad!
Butthe thought of a sequel is making me all excited!
I cannot wait at all!! :)
I loved the ending, it was amazing!
Sarah, come live with me since Taylor and Lyndsey left me for their men lmfaoo!
it was soo good, yes ma'am it was! And awee Jimmy, he's trying to fix everything. Bless him! <3
I really cannot wait to see what happens in the sequel since you left it so sad and aweee!

WELL FINALLY! haha I was waitig for some sexy time with Mr. Adam.
That man is way to irresistable hahaha
OKay on to my comment!
I absolutely loved the update! Yeah I did!
Zacky...pfft though I love him so much I'm leaning towards Team Adam! haha
One more chapter, Ah my brain is going into overdrive! I don't want it to ed ever!

Oh no! That was such a sad chapter, sweets! But I still loved it as always. Can't wait for the next one even though it's the last. What other stories do you have in the works, love?

I have a horrible feeling poor Zack's gonna get his heart broken :(
I know he hurt her and everything but to find out that after what he'd done she went and slept with Adam, he'd just beat himself up and tell himself he literally threw her into Adam's arms.
Poor Sarah for being in this bad situation, poor Adam I suppose for knowing it was a mistake and poor Zack for if he gets hurt in the process.
I honestly think at the moment the one who has the most to lose is Zack, Adam can either stay where he is or gain from it by gaining Sarah, whereas Zack can either stay in the relationship with Sarah that's fragile and broken or she leaves him.
Poor little wolfman <3

I am so not ready for this story to be over. I get excited whenever I see that this story has been updated, and evertime I think "Ok prepare to have your heart torn to shreds and your emotions thrown into a blender." This chapter was no different, and I am really sad to see it go. The rest of the stories that I read can't really make me FEEL the way this one can, so kudos to you for being freaking amazing!!

Oh my gosh....
She slept with him =/ Shouldn't i be screaming yay adam at this moment in time?? Oh how this story messes with my emotions =P
But i almost feel bad for Zack, however much of a nasty little wolfman he is, and he hurt sarah; he does love her.
Utterly confused. CAn literally not wait for the end of this, uber, uber excited!!!!
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Oh wow those last few chapters were good! I finally got caught up, and I loved them! But I can't believe Zacky would do that! Grrr. More soon, sweets?

team zack.

YES YES YES YES YES YES YES!!! Zacky is just horrible! Adam may be the most manipulative son of a bitch on the face of the planet, but Zacky is just a plain asshole! At least Sara knows how Adam is, but Zacky is inconsistent and as much as he swears that he doesn't want to hurt her, or mean to, he always ends up doing it again. If you insist that she can't be with Adam, then I would rather see her single as opposed to staying with Zacky. Everyone insists that Adam is bad news, but he has not caused near as much pain as Zacky. After this, Zacky doesn't even have the one-up on Adam in regards to making her feel like he was going to kill her. He's horrid.

Well I definitely don't like Adam, I mean the guy tried to control her into liking him and shit that's not cool
And Zack was a dick for doing that but I suppose I can understand how he's feeling. She does seem to call on Adam a lot and he's always made himself a presence in their lives even if he's not actually there. Poor Zack obviously can't cope with the fact he has to fight to get her attention.
Personally I'd want her to end up with Zack and forgive him as I can imagine right now he just wants to kill himself out of grief for what he did to her.
I don't like Adam full stop, to me he's a conniving bastard who seems to know exactly which buttons to press to make her question herself and Zack.
Go team Zack still :(

*deep breath* and...
Neitheer of them. I dont want you near either of those two. Thats it ive had enough, and when i speak i feel i should be listened too!!! (I know i wont!) Lol
I dislike Adam atm for the whole "You made me feel as if youd kill me!" moment. And I dislike Zacky for being mean, horrible, turning all wolfy and attacking, and just being grr!!!
Anyawy! I did rather love the updates, im slowly getting use to all the fights and arguments!
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ZACKY I WILL KILL YOU!
Geesh overracting much? Man I would like to give him a nice kick in the shin!
Getting all mad and everything! I am not a fan of how he doesn't trust at all. RAWR!
pfft! Zacky D:< angry face!
BUT YAY! ADAM TO SAVE THE DAY! Ah he's so cute!
I LOVED THE UPDATE! Yes I did! <3