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  • cynicalqueen

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    Heh, I had a feeling Riley would tell Caleb the truth. The poor girl, really. She's going to marry a guy she doesn't even love... he drives her crazy! Thank heavens the guys told Caleb the truth even if it was a little on the blunt side. And yes, Daisy was very nice to just let him go like that. I just hope Riley doesn't marry Daniel.
    September 7th, 2009 at 05:16pm
  • lennonzest-

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    Daisy. Is. Nice.
    I wouldn't let Caleb go if I was her, haha.
    September 7th, 2009 at 12:22pm
  • factory girl

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    oh and caleb has finally seen the light
    lol
    September 7th, 2009 at 08:36am
  • daydreamz

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    omgomgomg.
    the last two updates were amazinggg!
    can't wait for more! :)
    September 7th, 2009 at 05:57am
  • HONEST MISTAKES

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    No! I need more please.
    September 7th, 2009 at 12:54am
  • factory girl

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    oh dude i love this story
    dont let her get married to some second rate non-caloused man
    (i cant think of anything lol)
    anyways update again soon
    <3
    September 6th, 2009 at 12:41pm
  • HONEST MISTAKES

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    oh em gee!!!!!!!
    Update soon, and Riley can't marry Daniel!!!
    September 6th, 2009 at 07:41am
  • NeverShoutEmma

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    so i do NOT like daisy.
    she ruined the chance riley had to get caleb.
    i think i will always be on team caleb.
    great update though.
    im excited for the next one.
    September 6th, 2009 at 06:30am
  • Logan Lerman

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    She HAS to tell him about their past in the next chapter D:
    Please update soooon..?
    <3
    September 6th, 2009 at 04:04am
  • NeverShoutEmma

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    aww its caleb to the rescue!!
    great chapter.
    this story is absolutly amazing.
    September 6th, 2009 at 03:36am
  • cynicalqueen

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    Riley needs to break it off with Daniel because obviously she can't stand him. Daisy seems interesting but also really annoying at the same time, even though she didn't do anything wrong. Amazing plot, I can't wait to see what happens next.

    Side Note: You sometimes don't place apostrophes when needed or get your "to," "too," or "two" mixed up... but it's still a great story.
    September 6th, 2009 at 02:33am
  • Logan Lerman

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    Great, great update!
    Keep it up :D
    <3
    September 5th, 2009 at 02:40pm
  • ForeverTheSickestMe!

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    ohh they almost did the dirty dirty hehe.
    i love the update doll.
    i cant wait for the next update:)
    September 1st, 2009 at 04:40am
  • HONEST MISTAKES

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    Caleb needs to remember Riley!!!
    I love the update darlin, can't wait to read more!!!
    August 30th, 2009 at 07:49pm
  • factory girl

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    oooooohhh there getting physical
    update again soon
    :D
    August 30th, 2009 at 02:30pm
  • lennonzest-

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    Aw man D: She should've pulled him back.
    August 30th, 2009 at 01:32pm
  • Nialls Freckles

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    ohmyohmy
    I hope he finally freaking remembers her.
    Damn.,
    lol
    update soon, or i'll.
    idunno.
    cry. alot.
    August 30th, 2009 at 07:45am
  • HONEST MISTAKES

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    Eh i feel horrible, I haven't commented since the first one.
    School has gotten me busy, anyways I love all the chapters after one :]
    I can't wait to read more darlin update soon!!!!
    August 30th, 2009 at 01:37am
  • lennonzest-

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    (Y) Can't wait to read what's gonna happen at the partyyyy
    August 29th, 2009 at 02:51pm
  • Nialls Freckles

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    I repeat my last comment [:
    lol

    update soon! :D
    August 29th, 2009 at 05:41am
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