So Sacrifice Yourself, and Let Me Have What's Left - Comments

so i just read all that you posted. and i have to say that im really liking the fact that brian hates her and doesnt realize that its her.. but shouldnt he have realized it when he touched her he knows that she lost it at a party and wouldnt he be able to tell that she the FO.. and kala is pissin me off like i cant figure her out i know she has to kill her but why is she still hanging with her and the guys esp. zacky not notice something up with her?? any who i love the story im ready for more ready to see about the party.

I read this all at one sitting:) Is she gonna go party? If she does, bringing Zacky would be ideal. Update soon!

Oh dear. Wounder what she's going to do?
More please

ok so i like this chapter, even though its a filler, but thats twice now that you've added something bout her and brian whats up with that?? you trying to have something between them?
and when is the rest of the pack going to know bout her being the forbidden one? i mean they have to know sometime right? well anyway just like before i think you are an amazing writer keep it up lol cuz other wise i wouldn't know what to do during study hall in the morning lol ;P

That's interesting.
She killed Brian's brother. Fabulous. And he hates her for it, but he doesn't know it.
....The plot thickens.
Can't wait for more! Loved it!
I wonder how they'll react if they ever figure out who Ace is...

HOLY COW! I stumbled across your story this morning, and I'm finally caught up! I'm gonna be honest, I'm not normally into the whole "vampire/werewolf/underworld/twilgiht" kind of stories, but this one has definitely caught my attention. I so can't wait for the next chapter =D

Wow......
Just wow.....

yet, i am still confused, when did this all happen ? shes the forbdiin one; really ? confused

Hm, so Candace's powers as The Forbidden One are becoming more and more evident.
Jimmy wasn't fat, really. He was just very tall...and being male, he would weigh more than a chick anyway. But still that's pretty crazy Ace could push him off of her.
This Kala chick is worrying me. I wonder what exactly she's going to do to Candace...
Loved it! Can't wait for more!

Ok so i wanted to comment when i caught up to where you've gotten so far, and i must say i LOVE this story. Its perfect. I am a huge fan of Avenged Sevenfold( RIP Jimmy "The Rev" Sullivan) and i love fantasy, so i say you have got a perfect mixture here. LOL, keep it up can't wait to see what happens next.....

great update!
i love the drama; i think kala will be a 'turn coat' in the end.
zacky & ace foREVer! x

I liked the udpate
things are getting hot with Zach and Ace ;)
I'm a little confused about one thing though-
she knows Kala wants to kill her, but why is she hanging out with her. Whats going on with that?

lol Jimmy Jimmy. :)
More please.

LIKE FUCK YOU SHOULD DELETE THIS STORY!!!
IT IS A-FRIKIN-MAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11
don't delete it please...even if it is for little commentors =)

Don't delete it! :) I'm one of those irritating quiet readers but seriously you can't delete this story because honestly it's to good to be deleted =D
Please do carry on it's amazing so far and I can't wait to see what develops xD

I absolutely LOVE this story! whenever I see you updated, I always go read it asap! Can't wait for the next one :)

Wow! Love it, update soon?

I like your story!
Continue it please.
i love it too! x

hey, i like your story.

Please don't stop the story.
I really love it.
^^