Oliver Sykes Tragedy - Comments

ooooooo.
see, at first, i was against this. I don't like Oli [no offense, please, i swear!!], and it sounded like it was going to be very much a typical story, though i had no idea how you'd fit the line in.

BUUUT, when it was over you totally changed my perspective [and i'm usually pretty durn stubborn] soooo kudos to you! So glad you made me take my thoughts back.
the layout was nice and basic, and the larger wording was terrific or i might be blind now :D haha... but seriously, that was really good. And sad! totally horrible, seriously.... :( I felt like I was inside his mind during everything, you know, seeing it all from his perspective as you wrote. great job!!!!

awww this is soo sad i started crying
very good and sad
poor oliver
:'[
you better wing
good luck